Jane Hyphen

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I have 179 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 103045 times and 179 of my stories have been cherry picked.
114 of my 1,103 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 120 votes

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My Dreams are Safe (IP)

My dreams are safe Insured in all the Tinted buds of spring I’m reassured, I hear In every skylark’s trill The aria of my dreams The watercolour...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part fifteen)

‘Every year seven pupil has a part to play in the Sandpool’s Christmas play, yes, that’s every single one of you, no excuses, no exceptions.’ There...
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Orphan Lamb

Who will save the orphan lamb? Shivered bleats, wet crease Skinny back, mucus neck Coated shine, ewe’s juice Pleads just like a baby In a stubbly...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part fourteen)

‘Got a telly,’ Dad said as if it were something exciting and new. He grabbed the remote control, pointed it at a small screen in the corner of the...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part thirteen)

It had been a few weeks since Jack had last seen Kayla. That was the strange thing, he’d gone from never seeing her before to seeing her everywhere...

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114 of my comments have received 120 Great Feedback votes

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Lovely description of bird

Posted on Sat, 24 Jun 2017

Lovely description of bird song, it really is invigorating isn't it.

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Posted in Evening Song

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I thoroughly enjoyed this, it

Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017

I thoroughly enjoyed this, it's so intimate but of course not sentimental. The part about your mum made me think a lot about myself, I must become more of a grown up! Well deserved story of the week.

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Posted in My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales.

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Very interesting Ice Rivers,

Posted on Sat, 20 May 2017

Very interesting Ice Rivers, I'm a worrier too, all of what you say here is true, I just can't stop imagining the worst case scenarios...p.s I know a grown man with Alfred's exact facial features.

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Posted in To Fear Fear and Worry is Madness

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I love this sort of surreal

Posted on Fri, 12 May 2017

I love this sort of surreal thing and you've done it really well, very funny and entertaining.

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Posted in Larry and Mick and the Niftily Deflected Insult

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Love the contrast in this

Posted on Wed, 26 Apr 2017

Love the contrast in this Rhiannon, your descriptions are so evocative. A rough sea is so entertaining, from a safe distance, I loved 'sparks high the billowed spray'. A calm sea is inviting. Your piece makes me makes me miss the sea 

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Posted in Ocean

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I love this and so would Bee.

Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2017

I love this and so would Bee. It's so hard for women when absolutely everything gets sexualised. Sadly I think it might be getting worse. Are we our own worst enemies? Occasionally but mostly we're not, just trying to survive and be all and...

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Posted in Boldly a Woman

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It sounds lovely, socialising

Posted on Wed, 23 Nov 2016

It sounds lovely, socialising, mature style, comforting and fun bar a few physical restraints. An interesting, beautiful poem.   

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Posted in The old Heifer and the Two old Bulls at Peace

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I never really thought about

Posted on Thu, 09 Jun 2016

I never really thought about how much history is in a millstone, what toil and how many lives nourished by the flour. Beautiful and interesting peom, very much enjoyed Rhiannon.

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Posted in Memorial

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Beautiful and sad. Yellow,

Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016

Beautiful and sad. Yellow, the colour of a glimpse of eternal hope. Thanks for bringing her writing to my attention, had a little look, she lives on in words. Sorry for your loss x

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Posted in Yellow for my daughter

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Crikey, is this a Suffolk

Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2015

Crikey, is this a Suffolk thing, like pargeting? Very amusing. Bring back the park keeper I say, he'll sort them out with his rake.

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Posted in the shared park

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