Mark Say

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I have 73 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 187904 times and 106 of my stories have been cherry picked.
139 of my 767 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 140 votes

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Dinner with Adele

I had a young woman made to look after my daughter. Then things became complicated.
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The Reawakening 3/3

I found an ally from my own distant generation
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The Reawakening (2/3)

I met my descendants, and faced a reckoning for the past
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The Reawakening (1/3)

They brought me back to life after a hundred and forty-two years
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Mopeds in Marrakesh

After two days in Marrakesh I'd noticed that moped riders plough through crowded souks without a care for pedestrians, and there were a lot of birds...

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139 of my comments have received 140 Great Feedback votes

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The Biscotti Exception

Posted on Wed, 05 Jun 2024

Sounds like a Dan Brown novel.

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Posted in The DWQ (Dunk-Whunk Quotient)

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Nice one Luigi .....

Posted on Sat, 01 Jun 2024

.... but I hope your next door neighbour doesn't read this.

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Posted in I Am A Sinner

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Excellent

Posted on Thu, 30 May 2024

Great story Turlough. Captures all the tension of wanting to be cool while being bound to your parents, and I get the references to ths school curriculum and music of the time (guess I'm about the same age as you). And a brilliant little twist at...

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Posted in Bill or Bob?

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An intriguing sense of

Posted on Sat, 06 Apr 2024

An intriguing sense of mystery and frustration.

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Posted in In A Troubled Land

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Very good. I can imagine that

Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2024

Very good. I can imagine that stuff like this goes through the minds of a lot of stand-ups who are trying to be 'edgy'; and there's often a fine line between being funny and being a verbal bully.

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Posted in Spitting image

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Nice piece Jane

Posted on Mon, 26 Feb 2024

Conveys life's disappointments and feelings of fragility, without sinking into hopelessness, with a plenty of nuance and a strong sense of the real world. I could identify with elements of this quite strongly.

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Posted in Land of Make Believe

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Good one Itane

Posted on Sat, 10 Feb 2024

Works well as a brief story and an interesting observation on human behaviour.

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Posted in Just like starting over

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Nice vignette

Posted on Sat, 18 Nov 2023

Conveys a lot about a life in a few paragraphs. I'm sure it will resonate with plenty of readers.

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Posted in To see the day of light

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Thanks Ewan.

Posted on Tue, 07 Nov 2023

We saw the exhbition of her work at the National Gallery three years ago, and I've been thinking since then there was a short story somewhere. Finally had the inspiration.

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Posted in Artemisia’s Hammer

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This one's great fun. Keep it

Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023

This one's great fun. Keep it going Jane.

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Posted in 'Parcel for you..' Part 3

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