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You Were Made for Me (1/2)

By Mark Say on Mon, 14 Sep 2020

When the rich can have young people designed, grown and conditioned as their perfect companions

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I Saw Her Again

By Mark Say on Fri, 24 Jul 2020

A man sees his dead wife in the street

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The Noble Dosser

By Mark Say on Fri, 10 Jul 2020

There was something between him and my mum ..... (Inspired by the Peter Howson painting)

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The Third Time (2/2)

By Mark Say on Sat, 13 Jun 2020

Plague, pandemic ... and aliens

139 of my comments have received 141 Great Feedback votes

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Made me smile

Posted on Wed, 28 Dec 2022

Wetherspoons ... great place for a first date.

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Short, bitter sweet and very

Posted on Sun, 11 Dec 2022

Short, bitter sweet and very powerful. I think you convey all the emotions in this with great skill.

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15?

Posted on Wed, 23 Nov 2022

I think there's valid scope for argument as to how that young woman truly feels about what she did a few years ago. I don't have a position on that; like most people I'm too far detachjed to really know her state of mind. But the fact remains...

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Good one Laurie

Posted on Fri, 04 Nov 2022

I love the sense of defiance against the inevitable in the final stanza.

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Good one Ewan

Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2022

Assuming this is written from a perspective of around 20+ years ago, as references suggest World War One and it mentions the ex-soldier's centenary. Good in conveying a lot through a handful of vivid images.

Posted in On Ainley Top Looking Down

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Short, simple, sweet.

Posted on Sun, 06 Nov 2022

Short, simple, sweet. And I like the sly joke line about flames and hot coals.

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Good story

Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022

Generally I'm not into fantasy but this one held me throughout.

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A damn good story

Posted on Sun, 17 Apr 2022

I like the way you build up a sense of intrigue to reveal something quite remarkable about the character; and the reaction of his daughter is a lovely touch that takes it out on a high note.

Well done Jane.