Mark Say
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I have 70 stories published in
3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 164747 times
and 99 of my stories have been cherry picked.
139 of my 757 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 141 votes
My stories
Goya's Dog
What's the most disturbing? A series of human horrors or a doomed dog?
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- 3560 reads
A Fat Nude
A man sees a painting ... and has a serious shock
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- 4 comments
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- 3254 reads
Redefining the Face
An artist pushes his model too far
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- 1366 reads
A Bar at the Folies Fulham
A work of art, a barmaid, a misfortune
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Duck in a Bottle
Two men in a prison cell take a twisted journey through Buddhism
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Well done John. I found this
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2014
Well done John. I found this a very vivid in evoking the mood as much as describing the place, and really impressed by that hint of something sour dropped in at the end. If anything, I thought you could have made a touch more of that, but still...
Read full commentPosted in That Field
Interesting story with a neat
Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2014
Interesting story with a neat twist. My one criticism is that the short, sharp sentences make the prose a little flat. It's more common for people to overwrite, but I think that if you bring a few of the sentences together it would help things...
Read full commentPosted in A Breath so sweet ...
Nice story. I like the way it
Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014
Nice story. I like the way it builds the sense of anticipation which is then quickly deflated. I bet most of us have gone through something similar at some time.
Read full commentPosted in Dormity Gardens
Aaaah! Apostrophes with a
Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2013
Aaaah! Apostrophes with a plural S! You also want to watch out for the its' when it should be it's.
Read full commentPosted in Sehnsuct
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