Mark Say

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Goya's Dog

By Mark Say on Wed, 26 Sep 2012

What's the most disturbing? A series of human horrors or a doomed dog?

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A Fat Nude

By Mark Say on Sun, 26 Aug 2012

A man sees a painting ... and has a serious shock

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Redefining the Face

By Mark Say on Sun, 19 Aug 2012

An artist pushes his model too far

A Bar at the Folies Fulham

By Mark Say on Tue, 07 Aug 2012

A work of art, a barmaid, a misfortune

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Excellent

Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014

Conveys so many old yearnings and frustrations in one brief incident. Well done Torscot.

Posted in My little Indian in Summer (I.P.)

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Well done SG

Posted on Thu, 20 Mar 2014

Very good. I really like the way you conveyed all the disappointments and little triumphs in a career with such economy. The short sentences work very well in the context and those scraps of detail do a great job of conveying the changes of...

Posted in The End of the Pier

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Well done John. I found this

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2014

Well done John. I found this a very vivid in evoking the mood as much as describing the place, and really impressed by that hint of something sour dropped in at the end. If anything, I thought you could have made a touch more of that, but still...

Posted in That Field

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Interesting story with a neat

Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2014

Interesting story with a neat twist. My one criticism is that the short, sharp sentences make the prose a little flat. It's more common for people to overwrite, but I think that if you bring a few of the sentences together it would help things...

Posted in A Breath so sweet ...

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Nice story. I like the way it

Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2014

Nice story. I like the way it builds the sense of anticipation which is then quickly deflated. I bet most of us have gone through something similar at some time.

Posted in Dormity Gardens

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Aaaah! Apostrophes with a

Posted on Sat, 30 Nov 2013

Aaaah! Apostrophes with a plural S! You also want to watch out for the its' when it should be it's.