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I have 241 stories published in 14 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 428626 times and 213 of my stories have been cherry picked.
358 of my 1,520 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 377 votes

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JoAnne Stefanizzi

 

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"Willow's Tail" 11

The potted orchid bulb had the tiniest of sprouts peaking through the soil but Perfidia wasn’t encouraged. “This isn’t going to win any contest." "...
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"Willow's Tail" 10

They returned to Martha’s house and Mr. Appleton, who should have been tired from his busy day and full French meal, seemed to have gotten a new...
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"Willow's Tail" 9

While Martha and Perfidia drew designs in the tea leaves at the bottom of their teacups with their slim spoons Willow jumped down from the stool and...
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"Willow's Tail" 8

Perfidia walked into the parlor after helping Mr. Appleton back to his room and gave a tired smile to Martha. Martha didn’t return it. “Cat step on...
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"Willow's Tail" 7

Martha stepped out into her herb garden and let the quiet of the day settle around her and since Perfidia had taken Mr. Appleton to his rehab this...

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358 of my comments have received 377 Great Feedback votes

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Intriguing poem Ewan, it

Posted on Thu, 17 Jun 2021

Intriguing poem Ewan, it casts a spell of its own – The reader wonders: Is this a spell cast by true incantation or by the spirit drenched in extraordinary desire, either way it is a potent poem. ...

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Posted in This is a Spell

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Tender and sensitive, fragile

Posted on Wed, 16 Jun 2021

Tender and sensitive, fragile in the knowledge that life can turn instantly to tragedy, or joy. Never knowing which will be given, at any moment. Your story unfolded with happiness then drew us backwards through the unknown terror of a diagnosis...

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Posted in Little Miracles

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Touchingly raw and a tearful

Posted on Wed, 09 Jun 2021

Touchingly raw and a tearful and sad comparison. Caged birds are a painful sight to behold, knowing thier freedom is just an open door away. One should never trap a free spirit or a feathered friend- allow it to soar, even if it gets caught in a...

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Posted in Caged Bird

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The vaulted mind, locked, key

Posted on Sun, 30 May 2021

The vaulted mind, locked, key lost and unable to see another's view is a difficult thing to be confronted with and I am so sorry your aunt and you had to have that experieince, but it was a comfort and support for you to be with her. And maybe...

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Posted in The Pocket Watch

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When you bring these stories

Posted on Mon, 24 May 2021

When you bring these stories to paper they shimmer. There is a similarity in the decades for me, I too was young in the 60's so the games of marble, imagining of cowboy wagons, finger guns and pirate ships from crates, rings true to me. But I...

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Posted in When We Were Young

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Brilliant -I could see this

Posted on Sat, 29 May 2021

Brilliant -I could see this person so clearly and you captured a human moment of misunderstanding and embarrassed communication and captured it so humorously- I loved this one very much, well done!

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Posted in Don't judge a book by its cover!

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Ah first love, the awakening

Posted on Sat, 29 May 2021

Ah first love, the awakening of emotions we never knew we could feel for another. It is heady and the world is vivid with color when we feel it but, as Jenny said, we do go through journeys good and bad to enlighten us, to bring us to discovery...

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Posted in The one that got away

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A Powerful, chilling truth,

Posted on Wed, 12 May 2021

A Powerful, chilling truth, "Amazonian lungs reduced to ash'. You have hit on every cause and sorrow and any who read this should feel effected by these truths. Thinking beings supposedly of higher intelligence, should have an immediate empathy...

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Posted in The Last Elephant

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Whispers of love do travel

Posted on Thu, 13 May 2021

Whispers of love do travel along sensory paths , a fragrance, a sound, the weather of the day can bring swift recall. Precious moments we've shared, recorded on our timeline, waiting for a replay. They are the whispered hello from the ones we...

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Posted in Capturing Garden Memories

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The poem is crafted in

Posted on Wed, 05 May 2021

The poem is crafted in perfect harmony from the first word and Where this poem takes you, is to that incredible, vulnerable moment you trust your love to someone. It is tender and heartbreaking and by your ending, it was the wrong person to...

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Posted in Pebble

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