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I have 241 stories published in 14 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 424874 times and 213 of my stories have been cherry picked.
357 of my 1,515 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 376 votes

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JoAnne Stefanizzi

 

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Cherry

A Christmas to Remember

Blue ice reflected the moon’s light. His hand warmed hers as Christmas snow fell gently down around them, but not as gently as his kiss upon her lips...
Cherry

December 8, 1980

It was 40 years ago today Lost chords Echoing lyrics Incomprehensible news Say it isn’t so Discordant Disjointed sounds Gunshot? Impossible Who Why...

On Halloweeen Night

Cauldrons of trouble Toil and bubble Moon casting spells In wishing wells Silhouette of gnat Tail of black cat Wings of a bat In a magician’s hat...
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Cherry

"Where have we gone?"

Mask on mask off Battle lines drawn Where only Consideration should dwell Etiquette found In Webster’s Now defunct Empathy as rare As clovers of four...
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Cherry

"Limited Vision"

Magic shimmers on the edge of periphery Tantalizing humans with its sparkle Teasing wishful thoughts Never to be granted Frolicking fairies Moonbeams...

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357 of my comments have received 376 Great Feedback votes

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I loved this walk through

Posted on Thu, 23 Jul 2020

I loved this walk through your writing process and I completely commiserated with it. It is very time consuming to proof and format your own book and the couch does like to distract us. Anyway, once you’ve hit publish and set if free on Amazon-...

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Posted in Shiny Things - A Ramble

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Poetry doth speak to our

Posted on Fri, 24 Jul 2020

Poetry doth speak to our thoughts – sometimes very well- Nicely done Parson – Wordsworth did applaud the passion of Coleridge’s poem but, I think, was off put by the length of descriptive imagery within the stanzas – Still he said the passion was...

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Posted in Romantic notions

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It's terrifiying to think

Posted on Fri, 24 Jul 2020

It's terrifying to think something is wrong with us- something possibly incurable-this is a very relatable tale- I'm sure many have been there and taken a deep breath- like in your ending- to learn their fear is unfounded and they are after all...

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Posted in Seventy Two Hours.

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Loved the b's bumblebee

Posted on Tue, 21 Jul 2020

Loved the b's bumblebee beguiling-dandelions definitely are. Lovely poem.

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Posted in remembering dandelions (again)

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What a lovely metaphor -birds

Posted on Sun, 19 Jul 2020

What a lovely metaphor -birds to children- their playful antics and hungry frenzy are very relatable. Your poem is sweetly reminiscent of time passing and life changing and oh yes, that lovely gift from time – wrinkles. 

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Posted in Here Birdie

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This story is so real - I can

Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2020

This story is so real - I can imagine this summer of decades past with your descriptions. Not an easy decade and so, I am intrigued to see where you will go in this story. Waiting now for part three.

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Posted in Sibelius Lobey (Part Two)

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What a smart bird, a fur

Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2020

What a smart bird, a fur lined nest, warm and cozy. The big birds don't know what they're missing yet. Perfect lead in to part three..

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Posted in Recycling. Upcycling. Part Two.

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Nature's creatures are not

Posted on Tue, 14 Jul 2020

Nature's creatures are not wasteful...that seems to be man's domain. This is a very sweet tidbit, now on to part 2.

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Posted in Recycling. Upcycling.

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keeping up with the jones..

Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2020

keeping up with the jones...what a lovely take on neighbors, as birds. I truly loved this little story and will have to find the first parts to read now.

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Posted in Recycling. Upcycling. Part Three..

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This quick lunch break

Posted on Mon, 13 Jul 2020

This quick lunch break exchange reminded me of those one word conversations that say so little yet say so much between the conversationlists - but eavesdroppers may not understand the context or flow of words. The image of a rainy lunch break...

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Posted in Work Lunchbreak Flash, Alfresco at The Colonial Cafe

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