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JoAnne Stefanizzi
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Twisted Time Chapter 2
“Where are we?” Sara heard the fear in Steve's tone and he was also squeezing her hand so tight, her fingers were going numb. “It’s okay; you’re...
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Roses are Red and Diamonds are Blue CHAPTER 1
The wayward winds Blast through life On a whim Changing everything J ane lifted the lid on the old trunk and the musty smell of trapped time...
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Twisted Time
“It is time.” Bilal said quietly but his sister shook her head not wanting to believe him. “You can not ignore it Sireal, I am telling you we have to...
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Sunday Mornings
Sunday mornings in isolation have made me remember those Sunday morning’s when I was a child. The house was filled with laughter and light, even in...
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Trapped in An Episode of SURVIVOR!
Survival, a word I previously associated with a TV show. One I’d never watched because I’m not much of a ‘live or die’ type and didn’t want to see...
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Great read, honest and funny-
Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2020
Great read, honest and funny- sunshine with my coffee for sure. I too loved to play llibrary as a child, I'm not sure why, but I used a lamp that I switched on and off to pretend checking out the books. Guess we didn't have a stamp pad, but...
Read full commentPosted in Pad Life 12: Summer's Here!
A raw emotional ride with the
Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2020
A raw emotional ride with the insight to her feelings and her solution. It is very well written and draws the reader in right to the ending- I found it to be somewhat Edgar Allen Poe like in its dark turn of events -her decision to live the lie...
Read full commentPosted in Who Knew?
Oh those washing machine sock
Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2020
Oh those washing machine sock monsters, I know them well, I have a hope drawer filled with the other half of lost socks and I know I should toss them but I cannot give up hope that that mmonster will burp and throw them back one day!
Loved...
Read full commentPosted in The Case Of The Disappearing Sock
Cute poem, very Funny image-
Posted on Sat, 27 Jun 2020
Cute poem, very Funny image- I think many can relate to that too far away 'Throne' and possible charlie chaplin walk trying to get there- nice touch to have the kiddies lauging from a window perch at the elders running by...made me laugh.
Read full commentPosted in Mayhem
I can see the similarity in
Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2020
I can see the similarity in subject - where your first takes the reader through feeling the musical journey and the second relates it to a writer feeling the flow of words- They could be combined but I think they stand well on their own.
Read full commentPosted in More Oh Yeah
Great piece of childhood
Posted on Fri, 26 Jun 2020
Great piece of childhood reminiscence- The stories read by lamplight or candle in the impressionable years were absolutely the best. I myself fell in love with anything magical. I loved that you described the village and the mobile library and...
Read full commentPosted in The Corner Library
Sacred geometry-phi- fractals
Posted on Fri, 26 Jun 2020
Sacred geometry-phi- fractals- the beauty of design and connectivity in nature...the fragility of life...the curiosity of death? I felt all of this flowing outward from your eloquently written poem.
Especially loved:{ If we are made of...
Read full commentPosted in Golden Ratio
The movement of the river,
Posted on Tue, 23 Jun 2020
The movement of the river, swift and forward like time it does not change its course. No, sadly, we can never go back to what was- but we can hold the memory forever in our hearts of those who have taken the rivers ride away from us. I loved this...
Read full commentPosted in Sweet river
I get it and I love it - I
Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2020
I get it and I love it - I too am at my creative best at night and what I feel is a trance like state when the words flow naturally - it can be euphoric and almost transcendental –
I love that feeling when the words fly like fluttering...
Read full commentPosted in More Oh Yeah
It reads like a symphony of
Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2020
It reads like a symphony of nature, each playing their part in the garden's orchestra. I loved the grass audience and the cascades of pale gold candelabras - it all creates a picture of beauty and harmony and I could almost smell the honeysuckle'...
Read full commentPosted in june 25th, woods after a hot day
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