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I have 1842 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2572805 times and 537 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1324 of my 12,087 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1362 votes

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Up on the Mortimer Trail

After so much rain our lanes are full of potholes hidden under puddles. We had to drive carefully cross-county to a point where we wanted to climb up...
Cherry

Feeling to find it

Off to a night-time bathroom visit she goes, touching the bed rail, the door handle … climbing back under the duvet … now where’s that bottle to warm...

The Giver of Life

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Christ Jesus said, Seek out, pursue food that sustains which does not spoil, endures: so heed his wondrous...
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Cherry

Progress!

Winter’s retreating …
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Joyful, frugal celebration!

Her ring was old, her grandma’s gold; her love, commitment new and true; her dress she’d had to borrow … no sop to superstition, or slavish following of tradition – just

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1324 of my comments have received 1362 Great Feedback votes

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I was amused at the

Posted on Tue, 05 Mar 2024

I was amused at the anthropomorphic little plants determined to do good despite! The greening over and burial of many lost/perished civilizations come to light, after disappearance. Rhiannon

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Posted in Blind Faith

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Evokes the quiet bustle and

Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2024

Evokes the quiet bustle and calm of spring's activity developing.  Thank you. Rhiannon

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Posted in Rousing Spring

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Seems quite a 'rough jewel',

Posted on Fri, 01 Mar 2024

Seems quite a 'rough jewel', wants to help the lady, but is frustrated with himself how his hang-ups and irritations roughen his tongue and shorten his patience, sharpen his manner. Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (14)

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I'm sorry I missed this Jenny

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2024

I'm sorry I missed this Jenny. And have missed you writing recently. I hadn't  heard of this lady. Quite some walk! Rhiannon

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Posted in The Fish Hawker

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Just a few lines expressive

Posted on Wed, 28 Feb 2024

Just a few lines expressive of the trouble of war. There is so much war around the world, and much we rarely hear about.

When we were growing up our father couldn't really talk about the war (WW2) with us, though he got frustrated at some...

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Posted in Conscript

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He does seem to have a lot of

Posted on Tue, 27 Feb 2024

He does seem to have a lot of hang-ups. I suppose that is all part of the back-story. Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (13)

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I don't think I understand

Posted on Sun, 25 Feb 2024

I don't think I understand the 'warm gun' phrase though maybe it is conjuring up how we can selfishly grab what will (we think) bring us happiness, without care for harm that the action may bring to others.

I like your concentration on the...

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Posted in Catch-me-if-you-can

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Your picture (attractively

Posted on Sat, 24 Feb 2024

Your picture (attractively written) is of matter coming from nowhere and suddenly light, and suddenly the matter arranging itself. That does seem rather remarkable to assemble into complexity unless guided, and that by an extreme intelligence and...

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Posted in That first light

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I liked the way you described

Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2024

I liked the way you described open and friendly smiles that open up a link. But your later comments show how despite the genuine friendliness, alcohol prevents a real openness, and dims the sense of need or work for others' needs. So much going...

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Posted in Johnny Ten Levs

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Thank you. It was just that

Posted on Thu, 22 Feb 2024

Thank you. It was just that last part we had to scramble up as there is a carpark below (full of puddles and potholes!). The 'giant golf ball' can be seen from afar (as a tiny golf ball catching the sun!) looking like an observatory but I think...

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Posted in Titterstone Clee (533m)16/02/24

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