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I have 2060 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4503285 times and 639 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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The Best Good Turn – from Fear

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Always fear of ghosts and ghouls and fickle spirits’ tricks. Better turn to One who rules and evil’s end...

In the middle of tonight!

(UK local) “Where has that hour gone? …
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Cherry

One ray at a time

Rays of light herald the rising sun: the night is passing, work to be done … Rays of love pierce … work to be done begun together – rays of light pierce the night.
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Why is there still a church?

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] How come there’s still believers found who love that carpenter? Though long time’s past they still abound –...

A Hazy Memory of an Uncle’s Trick

His father made him a wooden box (– I think the making gave him pleasure) … His uncle said he would, with ease open and remove something. (Just why do uncles love to tease?) …
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1504 of my comments have received 1547 Great Feedback votes

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I'm so glad I know that that

Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022

I'm so glad I know that that is not the future!! Amazing to imagine a world government forming (must be authoritarian), but when that is superceded by a computer, I suppose there is no possibility of criticizing or changing its views at all...

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Posted in It's the year. . .

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Difficult to comment on a

Posted on Wed, 21 Sep 2022

Difficult to comment on a story in progress. But your descriptions and vocabulary are well-thought out. I dislike halloween type stories or fictional meddling and fascination with evil, so not sure how I'll find your imaginations! Rhiannon

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Two of Six)

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well-drawn characters and

Posted on Sun, 18 Sep 2022

well-drawn characters and background. You haven't laboured it, or made the reading heavy in setting the scene. Lovely Gower location. Rhiannon

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part One of Six)

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All clear, done, by now, I

Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022

All clear, done, by now, I suppose. So sorry, hope you enjoyed the family time before it all happened! It's a learning game and a perseveing game I guess. And you have to have grit and a bit of a sense of humour! Rhiannon

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Posted in Chemo 9

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They do look like the

Posted on Sat, 17 Sep 2022

They do look like the imagined fairy skirts don't they? But shurely not a witch's thimble! So delicate and swaying in the breeze. One of the lovely beauties of creation. Good to be reminded of the role of the roots, soil and rain in feeding their...

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Posted in Harebells

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You show her gentle care, and

Posted on Wed, 14 Sep 2022

You show her gentle care, and how much respect for her quiet consistency.

It is interesting how the concept of 'service' and 'serving others' rather than 'must look after me' has come to the nation's concsiousness through her passing and...

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Posted in Elizabeth Regina

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I liked the picture of

Posted on Tue, 13 Sep 2022

I liked the picture of Diminutive, drone leviathans !

and Melodic garden flights, esoteric hub of industry, a symbiosis for the ages

but I got lost in the mythological references, though thought it referred at...

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Posted in A Lamentation of Bees

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A pleasant musing on the

Posted on Sat, 10 Sep 2022

A pleasant musing on the changing of the season. Rhiannon

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Posted in "Autumn frame of Mind"

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As the rain lifts the

Posted on Sat, 10 Sep 2022

As the rain lifts the fragrances, you find your mind made fertile by the cool freshness! A pleasing metaphor. Rhiannon

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Posted in Like September Rain

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Hi, Jean. Writing about

Posted on Tue, 06 Sep 2022

Hi, Jean. Writing about crises with Effie, probably helps others to see how one has to 'get on with it' with any awkward, embarrassing, messy, nuisance, unexpected things, not just panic, scream, or wallow in self-pity. And so often, such things...

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Posted in Chemo 8

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