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I have 2166 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5636167 times and 681 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1551 of my 13,416 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1600 votes

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Scam!

Trust us with your money – the profit will be great! Hurry, hurry, hurry! or you’ll be too late! Money gone – to where? Seller’s disappeared. “Castle...
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Uncle Claus

He travelled far, he travelled wide, never was he satisfied. Nowhere to escape or hide, no young girl who’d be his bride. Then one day this house he...

A better earth

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] A perfect creation but sin brought withdrawal of fullest protection – described as ‘the fall’: disease … their Master … promised …

Rash (?) Judgements

Be careful who you mock! … Be careful who you judge… Be careful – who do you accuse… debate respectfully, and hear!
Cherry

Extreme differences!

The elephant is heavy, the feather is light, … The elephant walks … the feather can fly if it’s …
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1551 of my comments have received 1600 Great Feedback votes

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There'll always be a tension

Posted on Wed, 28 Dec 2022

There'll always be a tension between wanting to keep the land only for the flora, fauna, and a select few, and opening it up to more hordes to enjoy, hopefully fairly responsibly! Rhiannon

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Posted in The Highway

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I loved the first part,

Posted on Tue, 27 Dec 2022

I loved the first part, especially Sparkling in winter sunshine mesmerising us into forgetting their beautiful danger.

Wasn't too sure of all you had in mind in the second half, but thought it was to do with the similar pattern of...

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Posted in The Magic of Dust

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Some lovely lights as we see

Posted on Wed, 21 Dec 2022

Some lovely lights as we see the solstice pass. A happy time, but even better the celebration of the Ultimate Light coming, remembered at Christmas. I hope your holidays are peaceful and happy.

Puzzled as to why you bring the Druids into...

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Posted in Ancient Festival

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So sad, but realistic. It

Posted on Tue, 20 Dec 2022

So sad, but realistic. It would be good if there could be a continuation and a real resolution, not cheesey, but finding someone who could really help a change, and just maybe, even Diane able to reconsider and feel assured of real change. Story...

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Posted in The Last Christmas (Part Two of Two)

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Oh, Hilary this is so sad,

Posted on Thu, 15 Dec 2022

Oh, Hilary this is so sad, and of course unresolved. There can be so much ceremony that has nothing really to do with 'giving the heart' as you mentioned in the carol, and being filled with the love of God and loving his righteousness. It can...

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Posted in A Christmas Carol : Conclusion

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Lovely. Braving such

Posted on Wed, 14 Dec 2022

Lovely. Braving such temperatures, or benefiting from the film-makers that do, what beauty, but also, everything waiting for return of warmth. Rhiannon

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Posted in Mid-Winter

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from blackbird’s mellifluous

Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2022

from blackbird’s mellifluous dawn to a nightjar’s vespers. gave a lovely insight into noticing what can be heard and seen to try to keep as refreshed as possible from the surroundings . and the last stanza showing a noticing in walking...

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Posted in Frontline

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Must have been really

Posted on Mon, 12 Dec 2022

Must have been really pleasant to be able to walk out and see the snow-clad hills, all lookinng so different. And I felt the sleepy warmth after the sharp clear frosty air, making you/me drowsy! Rhiannon

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Posted in Walk In December Snow

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Well written to hold the

Posted on Fri, 09 Dec 2022

Well written to hold the reader as usual. An amusing device to ponder the question what would her husband have wanted for her after his death. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Last Wish of Christmas

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This is some lovely

Posted on Thu, 08 Dec 2022

This is some lovely imaginations! Especially like the 'tickling by insects', connecting the dreamy imaginations with very down-to-earth feelings! It reminded my of the fungal 'wood-wide-web' (WWW!) that seems to connect the trees of the wood, but...

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Posted in Would I Be A Tree

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