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I have 1835 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
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Blossom

Billowed dresses, pure snow-white … specks of gold wave …
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Praise, peace, palms and hatred

As prophesied, the peaceful King into Jerusalem rides in upon a colt, untrained and humble but some are jealous, angry, grumble: they ask He stop the praise and cheer, but …

What can you hear?

Shut your eyes: What can you hear? … “Buzz! buzz! buzz!”– … whose squeaky brakes!

If spin-dryers were uninvented …

In days of yore when we were newly wed, it was awhile before we could afford a twin-tub or a spinner, and for a while I tried to squeeze – as Grandma...
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War Confined?

If there were no bombs or dynamite, no nukes or WMDs men still would war, dispute and fight, but maybe more confined to battlefields – no missiles...
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1318 of my comments have received 1356 Great Feedback votes

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The robin like the red

Posted on Mon, 13 Dec 2021

The robin like the red berries does seem to cheer in the dark, dead days of winter. So I suppose we are glad when they get their sustenance. (Though I don't really personification of the sheltering earth!)

I just looked up about their...

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Posted in Robin At Winter Solstice

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Rather different. Intriguing!

Posted on Sat, 11 Dec 2021

Rather different. Intriguing!

I like the picture of strong wind at work. Rhiannon

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Posted in L is for Letters (to North Pole) and Lichen

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Good. I was thinking at first

Posted on Fri, 10 Dec 2021

Good. I was thinking at first that the knapweed look as if they have purple (and then grey) crowns, but no, you're right they are really liike sceptres. I don't suppose knapweeds are often written about either! Rhiannon

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Posted in K is for Kings and Knapweed

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Thank you, Drew! I hope the

Posted on Fri, 10 Dec 2021

Thank you, Drew! I hope the fun is enjoyed! Rhiannon

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Oh, no, I didn't think it

Posted on Wed, 08 Dec 2021

Oh, no, I didn't think it churlish.

I see you have changed it

having just managed to make a Christmas cake, I'v e just sent for some royal icing sugar to 'spread white, on all made before'! I don't like the ready-made royal icing,...

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Posted in I is for Icing and Ivy

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I enjoy hearing the bell

Posted on Fri, 10 Dec 2021

I enjoy hearing the bell-ringers practice. And certainly love seeing the attractive Jay. Rhiannon

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Posted in J is for Jingle Bells and Jackdaws (another go at this)

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I hope a little bit of

Posted on Wed, 08 Dec 2021

I hope a little bit of sweetness (real not fake!) does us good! Rhiannon

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Posted in I is for Icing and Ivy

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Don't feel you have to do

Posted on Tue, 07 Dec 2021

Don't feel you have to do rhymes. It can be useful and a challenge, but in the end you'll know what is best for you, and what you feel works in these. They are very cocentrated anyway.. And it can vary from verse to verse! Rhiannon

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Posted in H is for Holly (for sale and for song)

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I hadn't really noticed that

Posted on Tue, 07 Dec 2021

I hadn't really noticed that you are rhyming your couplets, which is a good sign that it is unobtrusive and natural, biut helping the impact.

Holly does seem to last well indoors,bnut I think I prefer  it without the glitter, and...

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Posted in H is for Holly (for sale and for song)

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I was surprised it was such a

Posted on Wed, 08 Dec 2021

I was surprised it was such a complicated will. Rhiannon

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