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That last verse seems
Posted on Tue, 27 May 2014
That last verse seems tantalizing – what is she/you troubled about in the relationship/conversation? hope waking manages to put the worry to rest?! I suppose it is all up to the reader to imagine? RhiannonRead full comment
Posted in A Glass of Water
a 'you-shaped hole' – that's
Posted on Mon, 28 Apr 2014
a 'you-shaped hole' – that's very expressive of loss of any kind, and so difficult for anyone else to understand and appreciate.
(I remember being so glad when we exchanged our very oil-marked kitchen carpet for a piece of vinyl!) ...
Posted in After You'd Gone...
Posted on Mon, 21 Apr 2014
Choosing pebbles/choosing words, smooth right through – a vivid metaphor, while keeping private the mysteries of the occasion. Rhiannon
(liked the picture, reminded me of some seen on stormy beaches – I think people return to see if they'...Read full comment
Posted in Stones
Can't say I understand all
Posted on Sat, 19 Apr 2014
Can't say I understand all your musings here, Tina. But I'm happy that scripture makes clear that Jesus is coming back, but that will be the culmination of all, - yes the resurrection of the dead, but also a judgement, so that it is so important...Read full comment
Posted in A Sudden Resurrection (I.P.)
Apart from your usual
Posted on Sat, 19 Apr 2014
Apart from your usual niftyness with rhythm and rhyme, Alvin, you have opened up, with a light touch, good thoughts about developing a loving care, a real constant sharing and thinking of the others ups and downs, and needs, and not just '...Read full comment
Posted in I NEVER HEARD HER CRY
Is the picture yours, Bee?
Posted on Thu, 17 Apr 2014
Is the picture yours, Bee? This has a lovely feel of painting someone and mixing it with memories and so many thoughts of the person that can't be painted on and yet somehow can affect the painting to somehow impart character and experiences....Read full comment
Posted in Emily
Well, Bee, it just shows - I
Posted on Mon, 07 Apr 2014
Well, Bee, it just shows - I only just noticed this now, because I checked on you, as so often I mostly have a check of the new poetry. I too have a growing list of contributors, many of whom mostly do prose only, and see what I can follow. I've...Read full comment
Posted in Complaint
Hi, Moya, read all three
Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014
Hi, Moya, read all three parts together. You seem to have started on a huge labour!
I was intrigued by your moving from 'the big, bad businesses' and the pleasure people have in laying into anonymous people as a group, to the more personal...