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The Awesome Message
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] To Nazareth the angel came to tell of Mary’s son who’d reign for ever – Mary, puzzled, heard the astonishing...
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Covet Contentment
Warm weather gives pleasure while …but weather extremes … remind us … what we have got for a while.
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An Obliging Treecreeper
What’s that skittering up the tree? – brown as the bark, so hard to see. … – it seemed to patiently wait until we were suited and done – then …
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The Book to love not hate
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] They loved, lived by the Bible, so their life was on the line … Why is the Bible hated so, the Book of hope and love? … God made all good, mankind has messed perfect creation spoiled …
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Robin’s Pincushion
beautfiul colourful rose bedeguar gall … 'save whallop' …
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Seems like a maturing of
Posted on Fri, 09 Oct 2015
Seems like a maturing of companionship as age and the turmoils of life creep in. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in It was Summer - that First Morning
I like the way you 'throw in'
Posted on Wed, 07 Oct 2015
I like the way you 'throw in' lines like about the difficulties of finding the way out in IKEA (living so far from one, we have found them quite overwhelming on our occasional visits!) and not having time to think about the emptiness that will...
Read full commentPosted in Stepping Stones (Poetry Monthly)
So honest, so sad, so simply
Posted on Sat, 03 Oct 2015
So honest, so sad, so simply and clearly written. There does seem some sort of deep caring love there, and a trusting love to some extent, but that can't (at present) meet, and a looking for excitement that won't satisfy. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Clocking In
Some interesting thought
Posted on Wed, 30 Sep 2015
Some interesting thought threads here, Terry, and play on the sounds of vale/veil/countervail.
Read full commentIn line 3 is it meant to be 'vail'' or veil' ?
Posted in Vale of Tears
So important, those last two
Posted on Mon, 28 Sep 2015
So important, those last two lines, and the whole poem speaks of imortant things being 'taught' that are probably unnoticed by many, rather than the whisking of children hither and thither for special experiences and 'education'. I think we found...
Read full commentPosted in A Natural Mum
Nice little incident. There
Posted on Mon, 28 Sep 2015
Nice little incident. There are often those occasional little sparks of communiation, memories, and humour that help to realise that the confused person is still there somewhere inside, and help to be able to show love and warmth more...
Read full commentPosted in Journeys
It does seem to have the feel
Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015
It does seem to have the feel of the girl who's been so sick and a bit nightmarey with fever, and feeling the oddness of convalescence and everything feeling distorted, and also the feel of a little girl wanting to be a bit removed from...
Read full commentPosted in Slow Burn
Very enjoyable going on the
Posted on Thu, 24 Sep 2015
Very enjoyable going on the walk with you again, and the sense of time and the kind of noticing that goes with the speed, or lack of it, of a walk makes it seem very real. A lovely Pick of the Day too.
Read full commentI've been trying to catch the...
Posted in In July
What a nice way to end, and
Posted on Sat, 19 Sep 2015
What a nice way to end, and even the advice she was able to give him, really just nudging him on the way he had been tending to go of realising how much these people had done for him, and his need of showing his changed attitudes.
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Posted in The Wanderlust Lady and the Door to Door Salesman - 41 The End
From an extremely brief
Posted on Mon, 14 Sep 2015
From an extremely brief offering to a very lengthy one! Certainly not sure I've followed it all (though as usual your rolling, rhythmic rhyming is very effective), but the thoughts that come to mind at the end are that there was a new start after...
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