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I have 1834 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
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Relationship

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] “Immanuel” means “God with us” – to you is he a stranger? He wants a real relationship, so came, lay in a...
Cherry

Turn of the year ’scape

Scrawny trees stark on pale clear sky tangled twigs and mistletoe orbs; jaded damp sodden turf, wintery stillnes ’til sudden stormy shake of blasting...
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Journeying

What difference made by passing gong? … our foolish fritterings don’t repeat.
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Cherry

Spaceship Food

a rework of a piece for an IP a long time ago on ‘Skeuomorphism'*
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Why Bethlehem's remembered

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Now Bethlehem’s remembered throughout the ages vast, for there the Prince was born whose just government...

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1316 of my comments have received 1354 Great Feedback votes

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delightful picture and useful

Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021

delightful picture and useful metaphor! Hard to apologise and retract too. Rhiannon

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I'm always surprised to

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

I'm always surprised to realise how much travel occurred for many at that time with jobs in India and the Far East, aware of how much more difficult and slow travel was then. And then to realise how easily writing could be lost at sea, with no '...

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Know so much about him, yet

Posted on Fri, 16 Jul 2021

Know so much about him, yet feel I know or understand him hardly at all, because of what he didn't tell or share, and the culture/language barrier!. But an interesting read! Rhiannon

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I like that you seem to be

Posted on Wed, 14 Jul 2021

I like that you seem to be showing that 'coming home' is returning to your loved one(s) and recontacting/reconnencting with eye communication, not just the return to a family house! Rhiannon

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As one gets older there are

Posted on Tue, 13 Jul 2021

As one gets older there are bound to be more deaths to face, especially in that era, but they have had to face a lot at once. It is sobering reading. He himself seems a strange mix of confidence in his own judgements, and hurt at other's...

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It sounds as if those pirate

Posted on Fri, 09 Jul 2021

It sounds as if those pirate ships were stirring up trouble, or taking advantage. Sad suspicion and ill feeling and lack of understanding showing up again, and lack of really trusted negotiatiors, and explainers?! All very interesting glimpses of...

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And of Hong Kong in that era

Posted on Tue, 06 Jul 2021

And of Hong Kong in that era too. Is there more information about the orphanage and the other charities to come? I didn't realise that they had such a humidity problem. Rhiannon

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So often a tension between

Posted on Fri, 02 Jul 2021

So often a tension between wanting to promote trade to other countries, but suspicion, lack of trust, difficulties of communication because of language, culture and long isolation, and of course many times neither nationality always behaving well...

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I think we were once there in

Posted on Thu, 01 Jul 2021

I think we were once there in cowslip time - such rich yellow where a lot grow undisturbed. It's good you are able to go walking again in such countryside. Rhiannon

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They seem to have kept up

Posted on Tue, 29 Jun 2021

They seem to have kept up quite a bit of correspondence across the world, and he still seemed to have an influence in the family. So different from communications these days!

The new tripn sounds as if it will have much to share with us!...

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