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I have 2159 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5562162 times and 678 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1548 of my 13,388 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1597 votes

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Above Weobley

(26/01/24) Late afternoon low January sunshine bright glinting on the wet grass and squelchy mud, dazzling in the westward walk – so blundering in...
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'A bump of originality'*

… an unexpected twist, insertion, a catch in the rhythm a …
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What happened, little car?

“Little car, little car, have you been far? have you been far?” ‘They drove me off and made me go fast and then just kept going, I was drained at...
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Meeting the King

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] … dressed in a clean outfit … all your past that’s wrong must be wiped clean, and gain new attitude of heart where selfishness has been.
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Night Help

Slowly, silently, the lamplight falls here and there as the farmer strolls back from the barn where the soft beams lit the struggles as ewe and man...
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1548 of my comments have received 1597 Great Feedback votes

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I read some of the earlier

Posted on Wed, 18 May 2022

I read some of the earlier chapters, and have been meaning to catch up. As with this you are very penetrating, not 'comfortable' reading but challenging and sadly such attitudes breed very easily. Children are a responsibility not a toy, and come...

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Posted in Legend of the Pah - 8 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

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You model so much of how to

Posted on Wed, 18 May 2022

You model so much of how to handle such things. Thank you.

It reminded me of wry frustration when a consultant who had seemed very helpful before, suggested possible investigations, (which I didn't think were really relevant), but on the...

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Posted in Janus 12

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Window into memories, and a

Posted on Mon, 16 May 2022

Window into memories, and a window on to the garden drama! Rhiannon

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Posted in Open Windows Of My Soul

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It is interesting the

Posted on Sat, 14 May 2022

It is interesting the theories of what event may have triggered the legend, but the caution of going back on your promise came I think clearly from it when reading it as a child, and enjoying Robert Browning’s

 Rats!
They fought
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Posted in An Eternal Debt (The Pied Piper of Hamlin)

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You are amazing in being able

Posted on Thu, 12 May 2022

You are amazing in being able to calmly and clearly explain these things. I hope it helps you too to do so! And are able to adapt to a new routine! Rhiannon

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Posted in Hospital 3 and Janus 11

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I had thought the 'blue

Posted on Wed, 11 May 2022

I had thought the 'blue button' was to call for a nurse to decide if you needed more. I'm surprised they would let you give yourself too much, but there is such a fine line between what seems necessary and what is too much I suppose, and so...

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Posted in Hospital 2, Janus 10

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All I know about Stirling is

Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022

All I know about Stirling is a night campng as a family next to chicken farm, which we didn't really realise unitl the cockrels crowed early next morning! How was it as a place then compared to rumours of Glasgow's troubles?

I now know...

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Posted in Ray's Memories age 19

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I've read this a few times,

Posted on Fri, 06 May 2022

I've read this a few times, Di, and Jenny's analysis. Interestingly the new IP is now 'change'. (sorry, my memory is at fault, just realised it's 'choice'!)

I thought at first your photo was of 'rubbish', but guess now it is lego...

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Posted in wheels to rotors

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I don't know how I missed

Posted on Wed, 04 May 2022

I don't know how I missed this 'til now! You capture the wonder that suddenly fills the woodlands so amazingly, sky reflected flooding the floor sprung from mud's dreaming so achingly beautiful of shade. Rhiannon

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Posted in indigo

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It's very atmospheric and

Posted on Mon, 02 May 2022

It's very atmospheric and blends the desire of not conforming, and wanting to lose themselves in beat and sound loud enough to escape into, with the expoitation they are so vulnerable to  —

crafty foxes calculating:befriending victims...

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Posted in Trail Of Thought

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