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I have 2145 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5443836 times and 672 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1542 of my 13,321 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1588 votes

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[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] We see the outer side, the smiling gaze, reports of purchases and holidays. Concerns may all be locked...
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Above Weobley

(26/01/24) Late afternoon low January sunshine bright glinting on the wet grass and squelchy mud, dazzling in the westward walk – so blundering in...
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'A bump of originality'*

… an unexpected twist, insertion, a catch in the rhythm a …
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What happened, little car?

“Little car, little car, have you been far? have you been far?” ‘They drove me off and made me go fast and then just kept going, I was drained at...
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Meeting the King

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] … dressed in a clean outfit … all your past that’s wrong must be wiped clean, and gain new attitude of heart where selfishness has been.

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1542 of my comments have received 1588 Great Feedback votes

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Very gentle and readable,

Posted on Sat, 09 Jul 2022

Very gentle and readable, Jean. Praying your comfort and support through each step. Glad the staff were thoughtful, and your daughter a pal. Rhiannon

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Posted in Chemo 2

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Such a number of disparate

Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022

Such a number of disparate characters and threads. Will be interesting to see how this comes together! Rhiannon

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Posted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three)

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Jean, your comments on others

Posted on Sun, 03 Jul 2022

Jean, your comments on others' experiences though harrowing are useful to know.

I just pray the Holy Spirit's support to you throughout the time, and that you will know his fellowship comforting you deep inside even in particularly...

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Posted in Chemo

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Thank you for drawing

Posted on Sat, 02 Jul 2022

Thank you for drawing attention to this biusy little harvest mouse, so slight she can balance on heads of wheat.. and for the link to the lovely video. Rhiannon

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Posted in Harvest Mouse

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I must look up my Grimm Fairy

Posted on Fri, 01 Jul 2022

I must look up my Grimm Fairy Tales. I feel a bit confused about Snow White, and when I googled just now, realised like many there are variations on the theme. You highlight the themes being raised.

I wonder how many celebrities get...

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Posted in Snow White

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A dreamy warm afternoon

Posted on Thu, 30 Jun 2022

A dreamy warm afternoon stroll? Enjoying the detail with interesting descriptions! I particularly enjoyed the description of the pavement, and the larch.

Wasn't sure what  'Hear peace begin by pendant pagodas of treacle berry.' ...

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Posted in green serene thoughts

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As usual you write well, and

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

As usual you write well, and mix the bleak with positive people-actions. And the delight in less light pollution giving joy in being able to see the glory of the stars.
In the first chapter I was amazed at your little delivery-minions, and...

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Posted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)

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One of those flowers that

Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022

One of those flowers that repays so much to stop and look down, and such a delight as they appear, with such rich colour early in spring. You draw our attention to it in this poem.

Where we were away mid-Wales, the heat couldn't have been...

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Posted in Sweet Violet

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I had never read the poem of

Posted on Fri, 17 Jun 2022

I had never read the poem of Poe's and have just had a quick look. I found the rhyming scheme fascinating and probably lifting the content a bit, and in the content that strange mixture of wanting to leave and smile again, wanting to remember and...

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Posted in The Raven Returned

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Sadly they seem to deserve

Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2022

Sadly they seem to deserve each other. Such a sad waste of life and gifts, and miserable leading on to more miserableness. Rhiannon

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Posted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 13

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