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I have 2061 stories published in 17 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4504509 times and 639 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1505 of my 13,169 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1548 votes

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Use it well!

God made me an ear and with it I hear such music, friends’ speech. Do I listen, consider remember and ponder when …
Cherry

Heatwave

Sticky, sweaty, humid, heat, ice-cold drinks and cotton sheet, garden sprinklers, fans just blow warm air flow … waiting, drooping … a draft of cool...
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Cherry

Freshening!

Blowing, freshening, blustery gusts bracing, racing, whisking, frisking, decluttering clinging, clogging cobwebs – cast out fast by whooshing blast...
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Moods of Ocean and River

Swelling, surging, heaving … placid calm … Hustling, bustling narrow stream tumbles into gentle Monnow which …
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Birdsong: Listen!

[Afternoon on the hill] Burbling song … [Evening in the garden] Rich, deep trilling …
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1505 of my comments have received 1548 Great Feedback votes

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Quite a picture of the cool

Posted on Fri, 22 Jul 2022

Quite a picture of the cool of the evening, with dust, and sound settling with the heat of the day. A strong memory. Rhiannon

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Posted in Bed and Board by The Silk Road

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The wind sounding vowels, and

Posted on Fri, 22 Jul 2022

The wind sounding vowels, and stones consonants! Interesting metaphor!

choices cedeed, monocrops seeded - deft phrasing!

We are commanded to be stewards in our world but to try to do good, not for greed.

and an...

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Posted in sound escape

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Even reading the term

Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2022

Even reading the term 'woodland' brings a feeling of green shade, and a feeling of fresh air straying through it! Trees do seem to survive quite a waiting for rain, but then they can drink it up, and as you say it feeds their beauty. Is that...

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Posted in Silver Birch

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Seems a tragic parallelism

Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022

Seems a tragic parallelism between his mother's imaginative talking to the porcelain figurines, and his building up of 'castles in the air' and as you say, just desperately thinking he can start a new life, without attention to his own character...

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Posted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - 19

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It's good to hear from you

Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022

It's good to hear from you regularly, Jean. And your matter-of-fact approach, taking interest in all can be  a help to others.

A reminder too that we all have to live using and enjoying the time given, and blest to have an eye ahead. We...

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Posted in Chemo 3

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I hadn't thought of

Posted on Fri, 15 Jul 2022

I hadn't thought of waterfalls being uncommon in England, I suppose it is the kind of landscape. So many near here and in Wales. But this one looks quite unusual. The sound of waterfalls is very refreshing, and themore gentle burbling of rivers...

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Posted in St Audrey's Bay Waterfall

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How delightful! Such a lovely

Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2022

How delightful! Such a lovely little bird, I'm always pleased when I notice it, and it is easy to identify with its small size and upright tail.

Going to our chapel at the end of the week I was remembering that before the little car park...

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Posted in Unexpected Guests

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I've been mulling over this

Posted on Fri, 08 Jul 2022

I've been mulling over this awhile since reading. Intriguing, you seemed to be teasing about possible supernatural and evil solutions, and then possibly negating them, but in the end leaving things quite open, all in a sort-of 'tongue-in-cheek'...

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Posted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Three of Three)

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Very gentle and readable,

Posted on Sat, 09 Jul 2022

Very gentle and readable, Jean. Praying your comfort and support through each step. Glad the staff were thoughtful, and your daughter a pal. Rhiannon

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Posted in Chemo 2

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Such a number of disparate

Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2022

Such a number of disparate characters and threads. Will be interesting to see how this comes together! Rhiannon

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Posted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Two of Three)

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