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What happened, little car?
“Little car, little car, have you been far? have you been far?” ‘They drove me off and made me go fast and then just kept going, I was drained at...
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Meeting the King
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] … dressed in a clean outfit … all your past that’s wrong must be wiped clean, and gain new attitude of heart where selfishness has been.
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Night Help
Slowly, silently, the lamplight falls here and there as the farmer strolls back from the barn where the soft beams lit the struggles as ewe and man...
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Working together
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Youth with strength and fresh new vision, ready, speedy hands and feet. Those grown older, tired and slower cannot with their speed compete. …
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Digging up dirt
Many gladly dig, revealing others’ sins, their own concealing; don’t consider pressures past trivialising sins which now leave all aghast. But now,...
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Written so tightly, but begs
Posted on Sat, 24 Sep 2022
Written so tightly, but begs so many questions. Feel you get to know her enough to realise how much you'd like to understand as to how she is now! Did she keep clean from the cocaine herself, get through her degree, and the self-harming …? ...
Read full commentPosted in Sha-leigh - one of a series of my make-believe snapshots
I'm glad you highlighted the
Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022
I'm glad you highlighted the pleasure of taking time to breathe in the fragrances and feel the softness (and squelchiness sometimes!) of the damp green beneath your feet! Rhiannon;
Read full commentPosted in In Lucid Dreams
I'm so glad I know that that
Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022
I'm so glad I know that that is not the future!! Amazing to imagine a world government forming (must be authoritarian), but when that is superceded by a computer, I suppose there is no possibility of criticizing or changing its views at all...
Read full commentPosted in It's the year. . .
Difficult to comment on a
Posted on Wed, 21 Sep 2022
Difficult to comment on a story in progress. But your descriptions and vocabulary are well-thought out. I dislike halloween type stories or fictional meddling and fascination with evil, so not sure how I'll find your imaginations! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Two of Six)
well-drawn characters and
Posted on Sun, 18 Sep 2022
well-drawn characters and background. You haven't laboured it, or made the reading heavy in setting the scene. Lovely Gower location. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part One of Six)
All clear, done, by now, I
Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022
All clear, done, by now, I suppose. So sorry, hope you enjoyed the family time before it all happened! It's a learning game and a perseveing game I guess. And you have to have grit and a bit of a sense of humour! Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Chemo 9
They do look like the
Posted on Sat, 17 Sep 2022
They do look like the imagined fairy skirts don't they? But shurely not a witch's thimble! So delicate and swaying in the breeze. One of the lovely beauties of creation. Good to be reminded of the role of the roots, soil and rain in feeding their...
Read full commentPosted in Harebells
You show her gentle care, and
Posted on Wed, 14 Sep 2022
You show her gentle care, and how much respect for her quiet consistency.
It is interesting how the concept of 'service' and 'serving others' rather than 'must look after me' has come to the nation's concsiousness through her passing and...
Read full commentPosted in Elizabeth Regina
I liked the picture of
Posted on Tue, 13 Sep 2022
I liked the picture of Diminutive, drone leviathans !
and Melodic garden flights, esoteric hub of industry, a symbiosis for the ages
but I got lost in the mythological references, though thought it referred at...
Read full commentPosted in A Lamentation of Bees
A pleasant musing on the
Posted on Sat, 10 Sep 2022
A pleasant musing on the changing of the season. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in "Autumn frame of Mind"
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