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I have 2024 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 4188758 times and 626 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1478 of my 12,997 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1521 votes

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Freshening!

Blowing, freshening, blustery gusts bracing, racing, whisking, frisking, decluttering clinging, clogging cobwebs – cast out fast by whooshing blast...
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Moods of Ocean and River

Swelling, surging, heaving … placid calm … Hustling, bustling narrow stream tumbles into gentle Monnow which …
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Birdsong: Listen!

[Afternoon on the hill] Burbling song … [Evening in the garden] Rich, deep trilling …
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‘Useless Useful’ becomes Useful!

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Onesimus ran from the home where he lived – a slave to a master whose good care he’d grieved. The master had...
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The sounds of rain

Rain ground-pounding lashing, lightning flashing booming sound of thunder crashing – winds howling gales bashing rifting, lifting, water standing,...
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1478 of my comments have received 1521 Great Feedback votes

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I hadn't heard of your bad

Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022

I hadn't heard of your bad storm, Richard. Glad you are over it and coped.

I liked the brief refernece to the lovely sound of the ripples at the end, when night hides the glints. Rhiannon

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Posted in Ripples of Stream

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This is very interesting

Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022

This is very interesting Maxine. I take it it really happened to you, not a made-up story. I think you said that the hours allowed for sleep were shortened each day. Will be interesting to read how it went. Long way to travel. Rhiannon

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Posted in The .......Part Two

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Another lovely intense little

Posted on Sat, 01 Oct 2022

Another lovely intense little poem, feeling the rushing wind brushing your face! My father loved standing on the promenade in West Wales in a gale saying it was 'blowing the cobwebs from his head' after so much deskwork in London! I loved the...

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Posted in high seas

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I respect how much you get on

Posted on Fri, 30 Sep 2022

I respect how much you get on with things, Jean, and also your openness about doing probably unwise things when exhausted. I liked your last sentence! It reminded me of ' And God is faithful; he will not let you be tempted beyond what you can...

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Posted in Chemo 10

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Written so tightly, but begs

Posted on Sat, 24 Sep 2022

Written so tightly, but begs so many questions. Feel you get to know her enough to realise how much you'd like to understand as to how she is now! Did she keep clean from the cocaine herself, get through her degree, and the self-harming …? ...

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Posted in Sha-leigh - one of a series of my make-believe snapshots

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I'm glad you highlighted the

Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022

I'm glad you highlighted the pleasure of taking time to breathe in the fragrances and feel the softness (and squelchiness sometimes!) of the damp green beneath your feet! Rhiannon;

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Posted in In Lucid Dreams

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I'm so glad I know that that

Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022

I'm so glad I know that that is not the future!! Amazing to imagine a world government forming (must be authoritarian), but when that is superceded by a computer, I suppose there is no possibility of criticizing or changing its views at all...

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Posted in It's the year. . .

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Difficult to comment on a

Posted on Wed, 21 Sep 2022

Difficult to comment on a story in progress. But your descriptions and vocabulary are well-thought out. I dislike halloween type stories or fictional meddling and fascination with evil, so not sure how I'll find your imaginations! Rhiannon

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Two of Six)

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well-drawn characters and

Posted on Sun, 18 Sep 2022

well-drawn characters and background. You haven't laboured it, or made the reading heavy in setting the scene. Lovely Gower location. Rhiannon

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Posted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part One of Six)

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All clear, done, by now, I

Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022

All clear, done, by now, I suppose. So sorry, hope you enjoyed the family time before it all happened! It's a learning game and a perseveing game I guess. And you have to have grit and a bit of a sense of humour! Rhiannon

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Posted in Chemo 9

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