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This is such a sad story it
Posted on Mon, 25 Mar 2019
This is such a sad story it left a lump in my throat. To have to go through the agony on both sides is so tragic, because we never know if it might just happen to us, which is scary.
The worst part is that feeling of lonliness, because you...
There's something so comforting about the colour brown. I love your use of the colour, especially loved thick gravy on dinner...just how I like mine. Those little sparrows, where would we be without them in our gardens?
I'm sorry you've lost your job, it's probably hard to comprehend at the moment, but maybe there's something better out there just waiting for you...that light just around the corner.
you're right, I was extremely lucky to have the woods at the bottom of the garden. Spent long days playing in them. We had an old quarry at the top of the woods and made dens, it was all one big adventure.
I never realized when I started writing this letter that it would be intriguing to anyone else. I think you should go ahead and write to your father of the changes that have happened since he died. I know from writing this...
sorry I'm late to your poem Jane, I can't believe I missed such a significant piece of writing. There's so much value to this poem, it's like a gentle meditation that leads the reader down a path of natures beauty.
This is such a sad story it
Posted on Mon, 25 Mar 2019
This is such a sad story it left a lump in my throat. To have to go through the agony on both sides is so tragic, because we never know if it might just happen to us, which is scary.
The worst part is that feeling of lonliness, because you...
Read full commentPosted in Jonathan Roven is Lost
This is such a fun poem
Posted on Tue, 26 Mar 2019
This is such a fun poem Rhiannon, it must have been a pleasure to write.
Gave me a smile. ...
Read full commentPosted in Colours for Kids 4)
There's something so
Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2019
There's something so comforting about the colour brown. I love your use of the colour, especially loved thick gravy on dinner...just how I like mine. Those little sparrows, where would we be without them in our gardens?
Great use of the I...
Read full commentPosted in Kids' Colours 3)
Firstly Rhiannon, can I say
Posted on Sat, 16 Mar 2019
Firstly Rhiannon, can I say how much I love the name Pippin's Hill and the photo.
Your poem brings back the realization of just what a wonderful world we live in. Each line was a pleasure to read and thank you for sharing.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in On Pippin’s Hill
Hi Jane,
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
Hi Jane,
I'm sorry you've lost your job, it's probably hard to comprehend at the moment, but maybe there's something better out there just waiting for you...that light just around the corner.
I do hope so and wish you well.
I...
Read full commentPosted in Last Week I Lost My Job (Rimus Dissolutas)
Hi Jane,
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
Hi Jane,
you're right, I was extremely lucky to have the woods at the bottom of the garden. Spent long days playing in them. We had an old quarry at the top of the woods and made dens, it was all one big adventure.
Nature is so...
Read full commentPosted in Short Letter To My Younger Self.
Hello Noo,
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
Hello Noo,
what an unexpected, exciting surprise to see I'm pick of the day.
I'm over the moon with the golden cherries and love the beautiful picture of bluebells. Certainly brings those memories flooding back.
So many...
Read full commentPosted in Short Letter To My Younger Self.
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
Hi Rhiannon,
I never realized when I started writing this letter that it would be intriguing to anyone else. I think you should go ahead and write to your father of the changes that have happened since he died. I know from writing this...
Read full commentPosted in Short Letter To My Younger Self.
Posted on Thu, 28 Feb 2019
sorry I'm late to your poem Jane, I can't believe I missed such a significant piece of writing. There's so much value to this poem, it's like a gentle meditation that leads the reader down a path of natures beauty.
I can't pick...
Read full commentPosted in That's Not The Way I Go
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 05 Mar 2019
Hi Rhiannon,
I've never seen mistletoe like this before, especially not growing on orchard trees.
You've captured this mistletoe in words and given the reader an insight into its mystery...well for me anyway.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Mistletoe
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