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I have 1260 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5406781 times and 523 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2784 of my 19,442 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2865 votes

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The Artist and the Fishermen

Cascading colours drift on canvas, a firmament of yellow, orange and gold, for the sky with its passion glows as it welcomes a new dawn,

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2784 of my comments have received 2865 Great Feedback votes

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Now I understand a lot more.

Posted on Fri, 23 Jul 2021

Now I understand a lot more. Thanks for explaining.

Jenny.

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Posted in Moon Mamas of the Silk River Nostoi

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Although this was written as

Posted on Fri, 23 Jul 2021

Although this was written as a story, I thought it had words of such a poetic quality. I was drawn in by the title, which I found intriguing.

Jenny.

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Posted in Moon Mamas of the Silk River Nostoi

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What a real life story this

Posted on Fri, 23 Jul 2021

What a real life story this made, to have been through such a traumatic experience and lived to tell the tale. One can only wonder at such a scary situation, not really able to grasp how close to death they would have been, had it not been for...

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Posted in Maria's Diary 35 The Shipwreck

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This earth our home is so

Posted on Wed, 21 Jul 2021

This earth our home is so precious, your words speak so much sense Di.

Well said.

Jenny.

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Posted in Instead of throwing money at the sky

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A great description of a

Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021

A great description of a tranquil walk through a grassy glade. I could just picture the scene at the edge of the wood.

Enjoyed reading.

Jenny.

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Posted in later

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Shadowy images appear to me

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

Shadowy images appear to me reading your poem and hearing the great music, especially in that fourth stanza.

I loved this poem as a whole, but those lines:-

Ethereal mist drifts across moss-covered gravestones,

midnight...

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Posted in Another Night On a Bare Mountain

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Well told story that leaves

Posted on Wed, 21 Jul 2021

Well told story that leaves the reader feeling so sorry for the parents, and the sad truth of how the Sammy's of this world just don't know how to cope with life.

Jenny.

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Posted in Sammy's Story

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That was so sad that Sophia

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

That was so sad that Sophia Cubbett died after giving birth, I can't imagine this scenario, it's just unimaginable and so cruel.

I ejoyed the part about Albert Smith, he sounded like a lively character and Maria's writing came across...

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Posted in Maria's Diary 34

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Hi Hades,

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

Hi Hades,

on your question, I think it would bring some drama into the story, if you write about the shoot out at the jail, showing how the trouble came about, perhaps a couple of prisoners revolt, their need for freedom is so strong....

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Posted in Disenchantment 37

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I feel quite sorry for Mark

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

I feel quite sorry for Mark now, having gone so long without a shower and having to drink water out of the toilet, even though it is mostly his own fault.

I wonder if Hornblende will believe Mark when he tell him of his knowledge of Orion...

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Posted in Disenchantment 36

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