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Dwellers of the New World Chapter Nine ( Pt 3 ) Danger Lurks!

Cinnamon worked hard that very same day. Cook had asked the two girls to work late, as there was much to do, with the weather turning.

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Nine ( Pt 2 ) Time To Leave

When Lena finished speaking, Jay glanced at his brother-in-law, trying to get his attention without much luck,

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Nine ( Pt 1 ) Family Friends

Ben and Jay had left Varden that very same morning, going in search of Evelyne and Nathen.

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This part was hard to read

Posted on Wed, 15 Sep 2021

This part was hard to read Jean, especially the bit about little John Henry. I can't imagine why any mother would make such a sacrifice when she had such a beautiful home and family. 

It must have been hard for Maria to write up notes on...

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Hi Rhiannon,

Posted on Tue, 14 Sep 2021

Hi Rhiannon,

you have done a wonderful job with this poem. As we get older, it becomes wiser to leave the stress to the young who can cope...and it's good to be able to hand the grandchildren back at the end of the day.

I like the...

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Hi Hilary,

Posted on Mon, 13 Sep 2021

Hi Hilary,

Wish I'd had a Mr Wicks when I was at school in the 1960s. I absolutely hated maths and could never concentrate on the subject I never understood. Even to this day I don't know where I'd be without a calculator. More teachers...

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Posted in The Maths Teacher

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Another wonderful and magical

Posted on Sat, 11 Sep 2021

Another wonderful and magical episode that holds so much intrigue. Look forward to reading next part.

Jenny.

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Posted in "Willow's Tail" 16

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This is a stunning poem from

Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021

This is a stunning poem from you Hilary. Is it about Vincent Van Gogh? 

Jenny.

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Posted in Vincent

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It would be tragic if anyone

Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021

It would be tragic if anyone got hurt at this point. Phileus is so close. The only one he can depend on, is himself.

I wonder what will happen next! Will have to wait and find out.

Jenny.

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Posted in Disenchantment 39

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The process of preserving

Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021

The process of preserving needs care and attention. I don't know why, but your poem spoke to me not only of preserving fruit, but also the need to preserve the extinction of life...isn't it strange how words can take you in a completely different...

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Posted in preserving time

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Hi Jean,

Posted on Wed, 08 Sep 2021

Hi Jean,

like Paul said, it's good to be able to see a personal side to Florence Nightingale, other than what we think we know about her healing the sick, from history books. I felt like I was sat at her bedside while reading.

Jenny...

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 3

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Oren seems hell bent on

Posted on Tue, 07 Sep 2021

Oren seems hell bent on continuing with this quest, and I can understand why with the effort he's put in. I wonder if the others will go with him! What will their finding produce? Looking forward to finding out more.

Jenny.

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Posted in Disenchantment 38

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I don't want to spoil the

Posted on Mon, 06 Sep 2021

I don't want to spoil the story for others who read, so I'll keep what I think happened to myself.

Very much enjoyed reading Hilary.

Jenny. 

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Posted in The White Orchid

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