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The process of preserving needs care and attention. I don't know why, but your poem spoke to me not only of preserving fruit, but also the need to preserve the extinction of life...isn't it strange how words can take you in a completely different...
like Paul said, it's good to be able to see a personal side to Florence Nightingale, other than what we think we know about her healing the sick, from history books. I felt like I was sat at her bedside while reading.
Oren seems hell bent on continuing with this quest, and I can understand why with the effort he's put in. I wonder if the others will go with him! What will their finding produce? Looking forward to finding out more.
I can't remember reading the original draft, but it was a pleasure to read now. You carry the reader along nicely on an adventure that can be described as couragous. People who arn't afraid to take chanes are to be admired, like...
It's great to get such a wonderful response to this poem from you Paul. I do enjoy words and finding out their meanings. When I first started writing everything was pretty much straight forward, even with poetry, but over the years I'm enjoying...
It would be tragic if anyone
Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021
It would be tragic if anyone got hurt at this point. Phileus is so close. The only one he can depend on, is himself.
I wonder what will happen next! Will have to wait and find out.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 39
The process of preserving
Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021
The process of preserving needs care and attention. I don't know why, but your poem spoke to me not only of preserving fruit, but also the need to preserve the extinction of life...isn't it strange how words can take you in a completely different...
Read full commentPosted in preserving time
Hi Jean,
Posted on Wed, 08 Sep 2021
Hi Jean,
like Paul said, it's good to be able to see a personal side to Florence Nightingale, other than what we think we know about her healing the sick, from history books. I felt like I was sat at her bedside while reading.
Jenny...
Read full commentPosted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 3
Oren seems hell bent on
Posted on Tue, 07 Sep 2021
Oren seems hell bent on continuing with this quest, and I can understand why with the effort he's put in. I wonder if the others will go with him! What will their finding produce? Looking forward to finding out more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 38
I don't want to spoil the
Posted on Mon, 06 Sep 2021
I don't want to spoil the story for others who read, so I'll keep what I think happened to myself.
Very much enjoyed reading Hilary.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The White Orchid
I welcomed reading this poem
Posted on Sun, 05 Sep 2021
I welcomed reading this poem Rachel, especially:-
Once, men and trees knew the same earth,
its depths, but the poor also watched
the stars, and saw that one bruised soul
may mend another's, so -
once a...
Read full commentPosted in The Swallow's Broken Leg
An energizing poem that
Posted on Sat, 04 Sep 2021
An energizing poem that stimulates the senses. Great poem Richard.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Smell
Maria's voice echoes that she
Posted on Wed, 01 Sep 2021
Maria's voice echoes that she's changing and growing. The people she meets seem to have an impact on her.
It was great to read about Florence Nightingale, and learn about her younger days, she did so much good, and to think she saved so...
Read full commentPosted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 2
Hi Paul,
Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021
Hi Paul,
I can't remember reading the original draft, but it was a pleasure to read now. You carry the reader along nicely on an adventure that can be described as couragous. People who arn't afraid to take chanes are to be admired, like...
Read full commentPosted in Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)
It's great to get such a
Posted on Sat, 28 Aug 2021
It's great to get such a wonderful response to this poem from you Paul. I do enjoy words and finding out their meanings. When I first started writing everything was pretty much straight forward, even with poetry, but over the years I'm enjoying...
Read full commentPosted in Curious Ambiance
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