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I have 1257 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 5191345 times and 522 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2816 of my 19,557 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2897 votes

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Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eight ( Pt 3 ) Making Plans

It was early the next morning, Jay had taken second guard duty towards first light.

Elemental ( I P )

It was in the day...that the Sun God sent his messenger Dragos, with wings of mayhem, to journey into the ether.

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eight ( Pt 2 ) Fear of the Dark!

All was not well as the travellers stopped to rest, creatures of the night seemed to be stalking.

Dwellers of the New World Chapter Eight ( Pt 1 ) Friend or Foe

Varden took his hand from Cinnamon's mouth, as she looked around, he put his finger to his lips, telling her to shh!

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2816 of my comments have received 2897 Great Feedback votes

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It would be tragic if anyone

Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021

It would be tragic if anyone got hurt at this point. Phileus is so close. The only one he can depend on, is himself.

I wonder what will happen next! Will have to wait and find out.

Jenny.

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Posted in Disenchantment 39

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The process of preserving

Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021

The process of preserving needs care and attention. I don't know why, but your poem spoke to me not only of preserving fruit, but also the need to preserve the extinction of life...isn't it strange how words can take you in a completely different...

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Posted in preserving time

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Hi Jean,

Posted on Wed, 08 Sep 2021

Hi Jean,

like Paul said, it's good to be able to see a personal side to Florence Nightingale, other than what we think we know about her healing the sick, from history books. I felt like I was sat at her bedside while reading.

Jenny...

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 3

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Oren seems hell bent on

Posted on Tue, 07 Sep 2021

Oren seems hell bent on continuing with this quest, and I can understand why with the effort he's put in. I wonder if the others will go with him! What will their finding produce? Looking forward to finding out more.

Jenny.

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Posted in Disenchantment 38

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I don't want to spoil the

Posted on Mon, 06 Sep 2021

I don't want to spoil the story for others who read, so I'll keep what I think happened to myself.

Very much enjoyed reading Hilary.

Jenny. 

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Posted in The White Orchid

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I welcomed reading this poem

Posted on Sun, 05 Sep 2021

I welcomed reading this poem Rachel, especially:-

Once, men and trees knew the same earth,

its depths, but the poor also watched

the stars, and saw that one bruised soul

may mend another's, so -

 

once a...

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Posted in The Swallow's Broken Leg

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An energizing poem that

Posted on Sat, 04 Sep 2021

An energizing poem that stimulates  the senses. Great poem Richard.

Jenny.

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Posted in The Smell

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Maria's voice echoes that she

Posted on Wed, 01 Sep 2021

Maria's voice echoes that she's changing and growing. The people she meets seem to have an impact on her.

It was great to read about Florence Nightingale, and learn about her younger days, she did so much good, and to think she saved so...

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Posted in Maria and the Bellasis Family 2

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Hi Paul,

Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021

Hi Paul,

I can't remember reading the original draft, but it was a pleasure to read now. You carry the reader along nicely on an adventure that can be described as couragous. People who arn't afraid to take chanes are to be admired, like...

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Posted in Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

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It's great to get such a

Posted on Sat, 28 Aug 2021

It's great to get such a wonderful response to this poem from you Paul. I do enjoy words and finding out their meanings. When I first started writing everything was pretty much straight forward, even with poetry, but over the years I'm enjoying...

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Posted in Curious Ambiance

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