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A great description of a
Posted on Thu, 22 Jul 2021
A great description of a tranquil walk through a grassy glade. I could just picture the scene at the edge of the wood.
Enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in later
Shadowy images appear to me
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
Shadowy images appear to me reading your poem and hearing the great music, especially in that fourth stanza.
I loved this poem as a whole, but those lines:-
Ethereal mist drifts across moss-covered gravestones,
midnight...
Read full commentPosted in Another Night On a Bare Mountain
Well told story that leaves
Posted on Wed, 21 Jul 2021
Well told story that leaves the reader feeling so sorry for the parents, and the sad truth of how the Sammy's of this world just don't know how to cope with life.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Sammy's Story
That was so sad that Sophia
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
That was so sad that Sophia Cubbett died after giving birth, I can't imagine this scenario, it's just unimaginable and so cruel.
I ejoyed the part about Albert Smith, he sounded like a lively character and Maria's writing came across...
Read full commentPosted in Maria's Diary 34
Hi Hades,
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
Hi Hades,
on your question, I think it would bring some drama into the story, if you write about the shoot out at the jail, showing how the trouble came about, perhaps a couple of prisoners revolt, their need for freedom is so strong....
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 37
I feel quite sorry for Mark
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
I feel quite sorry for Mark now, having gone so long without a shower and having to drink water out of the toilet, even though it is mostly his own fault.
I wonder if Hornblende will believe Mark when he tell him of his knowledge of Orion...
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 36
Hi Rhiannon, how I remember
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
Hi Rhiannon, how I remember those early days of my son in your poem. You brought back those childhood memories.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in For a while …
Wonderful poem Rachel, full
Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021
Wonderful poem Rachel, full of the mysteries of the oldest stars and what they mean to you. Very impressed by those lines:-
Perhaps it is in the faces of gods we think
we glimpse in the cosmic birth of hydrogen giants,
or...
Read full commentPosted in The First Stars
So, this is the night Oren
Posted on Fri, 16 Jul 2021
So, this is the night Oren has been waiting for. Mark has definitely lost the plot, and his poor inocent dog Eddie didn't stand a chance, very sad.
Now I just want to know more about the black starless void...I wait with anticipation....
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 35
Took my time reading this
Posted on Fri, 16 Jul 2021
Took my time reading this part, there's so much of what Mark is thinking, which you express so well and is so readable.
Congrats, I'm so pleased to see this cherried, definitely well deserved.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Disenchantment 34
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