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Picture by pixabay free images. Part Forty Six It was a confusing Tuesday morning at Evie's flat. Mina sat in the kitchen stirring cereal around with...
Picture by pixabay free images. Part Forty One Tuesday came with drifting snow. Large flakes fell in the early morning. The night had bought so much...
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You've made these characters
Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023
You've made these characters so believable Jane, they almost jump off the pages and become real. I think Vanessa seems to be coping pretty well with Spencer in her own way.
the narrative in your poem drew me in right from the beginning, how fate brought you together, the many experiences you've shared, and many friends you've made along the way.
Wow! Penny, this is so exciting. You've conjured up a brilliant story, and just in time for Halloween. Now I'm excited to know the next part which I'll look forward to with anticipation.
You've made these characters
Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023
You've made these characters so believable Jane, they almost jump off the pages and become real. I think Vanessa seems to be coping pretty well with Spencer in her own way.
I'm loving every part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you....Part 6
Always a pleasure to read
Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2023
Always a pleasure to read this story Penny. Look forward to more.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 11
Hi Jane,
Posted on Sat, 28 Oct 2023
Hi Jane,
reading about the life of Vanessa and Spencer together is both scary and humorous all at the same time.
Always a pleasure to read.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you....Part 5
Hi Penny,
Posted on Sat, 28 Oct 2023
Hi Penny,
Oh! How I wish I could write a Halloween story like this, it's brilliant and so imaginative.
A work of mystery and inspiring magic.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Spirit of Sleepy Hollow on All Hallows Eve" Part 4 of 4
Hi Turlough,
Posted on Fri, 27 Oct 2023
Hi Turlough,
the narrative in your poem drew me in right from the beginning, how fate brought you together, the many experiences you've shared, and many friends you've made along the way.
A great eulogy to the love of your life and...
Read full commentPosted in Yantra Mantra
It looks like Chantelle has D
Posted on Thu, 26 Oct 2023
It looks like Chantelle has D. S. Stone wrapped around her little finger...as the saying goes.
You've been so inventive with the storylines Phil, which is what makes the story so readable and entertaining.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Can't Take My Eyes Off You (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 41)
Definitely a nightmarish
Posted on Wed, 25 Oct 2023
Definitely a nightmarish situation he found himself in. So terrifying and perfectly narrated story for this time of year.
Compelling as always Paul.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Diner
Wow! Penny, this is so
Posted on Tue, 24 Oct 2023
Wow! Penny, this is so exciting. You've conjured up a brilliant story, and just in time for Halloween. Now I'm excited to know the next part which I'll look forward to with anticipation.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Spirit of Sleepy Hollow on All Hallows Eve" (short story) Part 3 of 4
You capture those rays
Posted on Tue, 24 Oct 2023
You capture those rays perfectly in your poem Rhiannon.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in One ray at a time
Hi Jane, a profound
Posted on Mon, 23 Oct 2023
Hi Jane, a profound observation of school sports activitities, it was all supposed to be energetic fun, but I hated every moment.
Though after leaving school I came into my own and was more into ice skating, dancing and Yoga...then much...
Read full commentPosted in Come to the Sports Hall
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