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Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light ( PT 23 )
Picture by Pixabay free images. Part Twenty Three The morning that Mina was to visit the solicitor arrived. Evie had got Mina's coat dry cleaned and...
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Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light ( PT 22 )
Picture by pixabay free images. Part Twenty Two Two days after Mina was discovered most people had returned to their normal lives. Evie had spoken to...
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Seduced By September
Image by pixabay free images. August finally closes door spindly legs crawl across floor, with no camouflage to cover his tracks this waste ground...
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Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light ( Pt 21 )
Picture by pixabay free images. Part Twenty One Feeling safe for the first time since she'd left the veiled forest, It was still difficult for Mina...
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Promises Beyond The Veil Of Light ( PT 20 )
Picture by Pixabay free images. A Story In Forty Eight Parts. Part Twenty Kendrick awoke in the backseat of his vehicle squinting, dazzled by lights...
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This is such an astonishingly
Posted on Mon, 17 Apr 2023
This is such an astonishingly alarming read. Profoundly disturbing to imagine a child going through so much. Yet you write with such clarity, it feels so real, especially those diary entries.
A powerful read indeed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Waiting for the Flyers Part 11 Life on the Move
What a great story. I love
Posted on Sun, 16 Apr 2023
What a great story. I love your take on the inspiration point.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Fruits in the Attic. (Ip) by MarciaMarcia
Sorry I nearly missed this
Posted on Thu, 13 Apr 2023
Sorry I nearly missed this poem Rhiannon. I can't put into words how much I agree with you about parents on mobile phones. It breaks my heart when I see children crying out for attention, only to have a dummy stuck in their mouth, or a bag of...
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I was most interested in your
Posted on Sat, 15 Apr 2023
I was most interested in your piece writing, and how you evoke the positive ideas in helping young children, to which I'm in full agreement with. Having been a nanny looking after an 18 month old child till she went to school, I believe it's not...
Read full commentPosted in The Writing Retreat
"I am referring, Archibold,
Posted on Fri, 14 Apr 2023
"I am referring, Archibold, to the unfortunate occasion on which you took it upon yourself to overtake the hearse in the funeral procession, whilst driving the car carrying the immediate relatives of the deceased."
I know this shouldn't be...
Read full commentPosted in Driven to Distraction (Bring Out Your Dead series - Part 13)
I'm not sure why, but I got a
Posted on Tue, 11 Apr 2023
I'm not sure why, but I got a sense of The Wizard Of Oz while reading your story. I love your imagination for originality, it shines through in your writing.
Very much enjoyed reading.
Will read part 3 later.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Hidden in the Mayonnaise (Part 2)
Just found your story and I'm
Posted on Mon, 10 Apr 2023
Just found your story and I'm thoroughly enjoying it. Now onto next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Hidden in the Mayonnaise (Part 1)
I was so immersed in your
Posted on Tue, 11 Apr 2023
I was so immersed in your story Paul. It makes me wonder about all the missing people that seem to vanish into thin air, especially in places like the Alaskan Triangle, and the Bermuda Triangle.
There's so much out there that just can't be...
Read full commentPosted in Tommyknocker
Hi Paul,
Posted on Mon, 10 Apr 2023
Hi Paul,
you capture the endless memories of that tragic event perfectly. I've only ever seen the film with Di Caprio in and found it to be a real tear-jerker.
It's of value that you've written such an expressive poem and kept the...
Read full commentPosted in A Night to Remember
Some great use of metaphors
Posted on Mon, 10 Apr 2023
Some great use of metaphors in this poem Rhiannon, especially;
Like a chrysalis, bud breaks
shoot bursts out like a butterfly.
Such a wonderful image portrayed.
Enjpyed.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Graceful Uplifting
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