More bar-room philosophers

When Joe Irving, returns to Winterbourne after twenty years to bury his recently deceased father he sets off a chain of events

This is my opening performance piece for the 'Bard of the Fens' competition next week. We have to read 3 pieces from memory (gulp) on the theme of 'Wolves' Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

“So, you have found the Warrior!” he said to his reflection in the glass. “The Kings Champion, Chief Vindicator, the Scourge of the Zone!”

Harry recalled the fourteen unhappy days he had spent with his family in this gloomy common room after the Star-Drive had exploded.

The death toll from Saturday’s riot had risen to eighty-seven. Fifty-nine civilians were dead, including Vikings, looters, and others simply caught up in the melee.

She promises herself never again, again.

..." It's only a passing feeling, That too, shall disappear "..." It's only a matter of being Being that I'm no longer here, "