Is There Hell After High School? Or Am I Already Here?

Chapter One: Luck Darrell Royal once said that luck is when preparation meets opportunity.
Cherry

Hey! (IP)

Hey, you! Over here! Yes, you!

Burnt Sienna Leaves

“So, your favourite season has always been autumn?” Leaves rustle on a crisp autumn Monday morning...
Cherry

No louder than the snoring tigers lolling tongue!

O’ my sleeping; weeping, thoughts. We’re like army blankets, you and I Observing; nought but sunbeams... Nought... But the lintel iron moonbeams, Under—which no one listens.

City Hall: An Autobiography, Chapter 1

Chapter One of a continuing story about the employees at City Hall. Set in Toronto in 2008. I am looking for feedback on each chapter to see how well it can be converted into a film script.
Cherry

Brought Up Gay

Fred knew his parents were different, and when he is met with hatred from a bigoted and discriminating society, he begins to explore the concept of love.

Before it rained.

A child's world meets reality.

The Holy Lance - Chapter 5

A change of scenery might not be the answer after all.

Spent version 1

We spent the summer Twisting threads of echo's Into ambient shards of clustering starlight. Throwing our passions, Upon the little gods of this world; As we sought each other's heart,

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