Its a poem about some one loved no longer needing you to make them happy. please leave feedback!

A young girl goes to Cancun and finds that paradise is not always fun. Can she find love and fulfill her dreams?

its my first short story, please leave feedback! (positive, constructive or negative doesnt matter to me)

JD Salinger once wrote that probably for every man there is at least one city that eventually turns into a girl, but I think the opposite is also true, that a girl can just as easily turn into a city.

glance across and see, What looks to be, An angel in disgise, Beautiful in everyway, Hair, face, body,lips, But what got me most, Were the eyes, A perfect shade of blue,

I hope she’s well, I hope she’s fine I just wish, She was mine, But I had my chance, And let it pass, Now I look back, And wish I had done something different, But hey,