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Agree with Rhiannon, you
Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2022
Agree with Rhiannon, you really convey wildwaves crashing! I could picture the columns and the turbulence around them all through reading your poem
Read full commentPosted in Fingal's Cave
I do hope you can get it
Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2022
I do hope you can get it sorted out. In a way might even be better doing it online as once someone has talked you through how to mearure in the right places, you will always know
Read full commentPosted in M&S
What a good subject for the
Posted on Thu, 28 Jul 2022
What a good subject for the title :0) They really are like a curtain! I really like how you convey the speed of its growing with all the commas in the first part, then slow down for the growth of the hedge
Read full commentPosted in Competition
Ah, so glad you didn't stop
Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022
Ah, so glad you didn't stop writing these after all :0) are you seeing him now as an underdog? I hope that inspires you to keep going! I loved the idea of Brexit being in a box, but although she is not at all my favourite politician, how you...
Read full commentPosted in Boris and the Curious Case of Brexit
This was so interesting,
Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022
This was so interesting, flowing and easy in all parts except the bit about plastic, as if saying just with the rhythmn how plastic isn't part of the flow, the cycle, made me think of the beach where everything is beautiful and clean, except...
Read full commentPosted in Contour and wave.
So long as ABCTales exists,
Posted on Wed, 27 Jul 2022
So long as ABCTales exists, people will remember you and new people will discover you. We are the lucky ones to receive your comments
Read full commentPosted in Forget-Me-Not
That was a great ending, am
Posted on Fri, 08 Jul 2022
That was a great ending, am glad you took it that way. You really made the middle part of this one unsettling, and how she fulfilled her promise to help the shelter, that was clever
Read full commentPosted in The Miracle of Maldon (Part Three of Three)
Didn't find it melancholic,
Posted on Mon, 25 Jul 2022
Didn't find it melancholic, but that made it the more scary. Hypnotic, yes. But mostly seductive, the rhythm. It reminded me of the delicate ferociousness of a spider's hunger, the gentleness of it wrapping its prey as your words wrap the reader...
Read full commentPosted in Ceiba (Silk-Cotton Tree)
I really liked the bit about
Posted on Sun, 24 Jul 2022
I really liked the bit about what the magazine was called :0) Stil intrigued to know what role the dog plays in the plot and looking forward to part 3!
Read full commentPosted in "The Coffee House Spy" 2
I notice Sir Harry is not so
Posted on Sat, 23 Jul 2022
I notice Sir Harry is not so subtle as Willow :0) Am interested to find out if he keeps influencing the plot!
Read full commentPosted in "The Coffee House Spy"
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