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I have 9 stories published in 2 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 3533 times and 9 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1 of my 7 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 3 votes

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Drew White

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This Psych Ward is Driving Me Crazy

Dr. Berg held the coin between his thumb and forefinger like he had held dozens or maybe hundreds before this. There was no surefire way to tell...

Drat!

Silly me. It looks like I've locked my key inside my office again. Behind this door is my writing desk, my fountain pens, my typewriter and the key I...
Cherry

Unwelcome Gifts

There stood my mother, body whole and new. Her surgeries reversed, the cancer gone. Her arms were wide awaiting my embrace. Her smile a far off...
Cherry

Chapter 2: Shady Sadie pt. 3

“Did you see that girl I went upstairs with last night?” I asked “Who? Sadie?” “I guess man, I don't know, the junky girl.” “Yeah she left with Ivan...
Cherry

Chapter 2: Shady Sadie pt. 2

That was all I needed to hear. Toddler and Miles never made it to the parties here and it was isolating to have to hide my gear all the time so...

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1 of my comments has received 3 Great Feedback votes

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I liked this a lot. The voice

Posted on Mon, 10 Aug 2015

I liked this a lot. The voice of your narrator was well-expressed. I felt like I could hear her speaking as I read. Your diction is absolutely on point and the content of the story gave me a window into her world.

 

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