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Beth Tree and the Elgars 7
It wasn't long before The Variations on a Theme that Mr. Elgar wrote with the codes to say who the dedications were for became generally known as the...
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Beth Tree and the Elgars 6
Mrs. Elgar confided to me that one of the people who she really expected to be represented in the Variations featuring Mr. Edgar's best friends, was...
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Beth Tree and the Elgars 5
Mrs. Elgar remained a support to me as I continued with my lessons wish Mr. Elgar. And she also impressed me with her literary knowledge and...
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Beth Tree and the Elgars 4
I don't intend in this story to tell about each and every lesson I had with Mr. Elgar. It is meant to be about Mrs. Elgar, and yet she was so...
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Beth Tree and the Elgars 3
I played each of the scales in turn, over and over, and still Mr. Elgar sat at his desk, writing something, and paid no attention to me whatsoever. I...
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Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2016
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I hadn't realised this was posted, so am only seeing it now, but I had heard from Bee with her news before. If I can help anyway with the booklet, I will be happy to. She was the person who introduced me to this site, and kept me going...
Read full commentPosted in Bee's Journey
Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Sun, 03 Apr 2016
Hi Rhiannon
I'm going back over your work that I missed out a few weeks ago. This is a good story-poem and gets the message across.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in God spoke, from the beginning (Poetry Monthly)
Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Sat, 09 Apr 2016
Hi Rhiannon
The words fit well to the tune, and get across the message well.
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Posted in Certain Hope Reliable
Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Tue, 26 Mar 2013
Hi Rhiannon
This is lovely - and very poignant.
Jean
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Posted on Mon, 05 Jan 2015
Hi Alan
I was curious to see what writing you did that would go along with your idea of telling about how things were for future civilizations. This an interesting way of telling about the news - getting it second hand from the cat. I...
Read full commentPosted in Omar's Diary 3rd January 2015
Hi Simon
Posted on Mon, 27 Jul 2015
Hi Simon
Very action packed chapter this. And it is very visual - the reader can see it all unfold as if he were watching a film. I like the little details you throw in- like how beautiful the night sky was. I will forever remember how...
Read full commentPosted in EBOLOWA 13
HI Simon
Posted on Sat, 25 Jul 2015
HI Simon
The nasty guy was appropriately unpleasant, but believeable. The poor pathetic courier deserved to be found out for his short comings.
Jean
Read full commentPosted in EBOLOWA 12
Hi Rhiannon
Posted on Sun, 06 Mar 2016
Hi Rhiannon
I tried singing it to the Christmas song, and found it worked very well.
Jean
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Hi Simon
Posted on Fri, 17 Jul 2015
Hi Simon
I don't agree with Helen (Philip) that the characters come across as horrible. You are trying to get so much background in, through their dialogue, that it seems sometimes a little unnatural to me and maybe goes on a bit long in...
Read full commentPosted in EBOLOWA 9
Hi Tina
Posted on Thu, 18 Feb 2016
Hi Tina
Emotions never die - and the fact that you still remember and celebebrate this anniversary shows how deeply that emotion ran.
Jean
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