Ewan

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I have 1974 stories published in 34 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2131140 times and 1281 of my stories have been cherry picked.
357 of my 3,550 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 385 votes

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Ewan Lawrie

The picture is me signing copies of my novel, Gibbous House at Unbound Books HQ in Islington by the canal.
All three Moffat novels are available here

My stories

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Don't Ask

So many people in the Armed Forces back in the day - before don't ask don't tell - were living a lie. I'm glad most of them are still friends.

The Esoteric Few

Whom Byron claimed one of his poems was written for. Not this one, because it's mine, but it's still for the esoteric few. Image author's own
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No-one Found

Nowadays we need closure. In the past, it might have been a long and lingering grief, we have forgotten what it is like not to know, which must make it even harder to bear. Image is PD, YAY!

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what it s a ys Image created by author at canva.com
Cherry

Let's Dance

Go on, let's image source: James Vaughan, flicker.com Image Licence Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 2.0 Generic (CC BY-NC-SA 2.0)

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357 of my comments have received 385 Great Feedback votes

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Excellent

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

and serious poetry.
I wonder if 'god' should be capitalized? Or if you might insert 'any' before the lower-cased god?

Marvellous work.

Ewan
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Posted in The Wanderer or The Exile’s Lament

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I really enjoyed this.

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

It had nice rhythm and some good internal rhyme.

I wonder if you really need the final stanza? What does it add? It does jerk the/this reader right out of the atmosphere you have so skilfully created. \\\\

best
Ewan

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Posted in Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)

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This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day

Posted on Thu, 24 Mar 2022

Some may say it feels like Groundhog Day as one of these acerbic satires is POD again. Perhaps it is, but they are very funny, and goodness knows we need some laughter especially in the dark days.

Please share and retweet if you like it...

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Posted in Groundhog Boris

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Outstanding.

Posted on Tue, 22 Mar 2022

I can see, hear, smell and taste it all.
Very well done.
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Posted in Don't Look at the Sheikh

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This is our Story of the Week for March 18th 2022

Posted on Sun, 13 Mar 2022

Congratulations on having written our Story of the Week.

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Posted in Nor There

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Another authentic slice of life

Posted on Wed, 16 Mar 2022

Jack. Para Handy with teeth. I'd like to see more too. I appreciate It can be frustrating when you're shouting into the abyss with not even an echo for an answer.

Don't give up.

Ewan

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Posted in the ten-minute bore

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Um...

Posted on Tue, 15 Mar 2022

In Russian, “Нет войне” is pronounced "nyet voinye": strictly speaking - and also even better - the "voinye" is the dative case of "voina" so it means "no to war"

не за что.

A very...

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Posted in Het Bonhe

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There is,

Posted on Tue, 08 Mar 2022

but there's been no-one like this since Stalin or Mao. The guy in Korea is not really a threat. At the moment the ideology is winning over the personality cult in China.
I really believe if we had negotiated the peace properly at the end of...

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Posted in We Used to Tell Ourselves

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This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day

Posted on Thu, 24 Feb 2022

Taut, not a superfluous word. Timely and true. Please share and retweet if you like it too.

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Posted in Firepower

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This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day

Posted on Thu, 17 Feb 2022

Great stuff, layered and fun. Well done.

Why not share and retweet, dear readers if you like it too?

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Posted in Mercury with an Elvis Lip

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