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I have 494 stories published in
16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1803052 times
and 383 of my stories have been cherry picked.
101 of my 5,403 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 108 votes
Found the site in November 2011. Love the friendly and easy format. Write stories and the occasional poem. Have published four books, all available from Amazon. The East End Butcher Boy, Eastendbutchers Short Story Collection, The Men In The Shadows and Who Is Jack Winter. Always amazed at the diversity of the site and the quality of the writing. Try to write as much as I can and like to try different styles. Hope you like my stories.
Find me on www.jolono.wordpress.com
And my first book on Amazon http://www.amazon.co.uk/s/ref=nb_sb_ss_i_0_21?url=search-alias%3Daps&fie...
About me...http://spitalfieldslife.com/2015/03/22/joe-lawrence-traditional-butcher-...
And ...https://authorsinterviews.wordpress.com/2016/08/22/here-is-my-interview-...
My stories
10 Life Lessons. Number 7.
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10 Life Lessons. Number 6.
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10 Life Lessons. Number 5.
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10 Life Lessons. Number 4.
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10 Life Lessons. Number 3.
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Mate, can't wait for the next
Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025
Mate, can't wait for the next bit. You've created a character right there in just a few hundred words. I feel I know him, this could be a novel. Keep going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Read full commentPosted in Dead Man: 1
Wow Jess, this is deep. I've
Posted on Fri, 16 May 2025
Wow Jess, this is deep. I've read it numerous times and I'm still trying to work it out. I'm now thinking its a robot of some kind? But in the form of someone you loved? It's kept me guessing, which is a good thing! Whatever it is, it's good....
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Hi Jess! Of course I remember
Posted on Thu, 15 May 2025
Hi Jess! Of course I remember you. You wrote a great story called "Searching You" which I loved. Thank you so much for the kind words. Hope you're doing okay. You've obviously kept up with your writing ( I must go and have a look at your recent...
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Brought a smile to my face
Posted on Mon, 12 May 2025
Brought a smile to my face for many reasons. Firstly because it's obvious that you loved where you worked and not many people can say that anymore. Secondly, because you're about to start a new phase of your life and that's a good thing. I've...
Read full commentPosted in The Rest of My Life: Retirement Day!
Hi Mate, loved this. Brought
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025
Hi Mate, loved this. Brought back memories. Mr Whittle with his oversized slipper, Mrs Harvey with the palm of her hand, Mr Bush with his cane, Mr Charman with the board rubber. I was hit with all of these. I can smile and laugh about it, but...
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Made me smile. A good day, I
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025
Made me smile. A good day, I think we all had those, when we suddenly felt part of "The Gang", even if it didn't last for long! Nice read Caldwell.
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Great story Itane Vero, I was
Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2025
Great story Itane Vero, I was routing for him right from the start. You created a character that the reader can relate to and sympathise with very quickly. Maybe a part 2?
Read full commentPosted in Having perhaps the better claim
Liked this Ed. You open with
Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2025
Liked this Ed. You open with drifting icy kapok. Great imagery that sets the scene for the rest of the poem. Trees looking like fairy cakes, weeping cars... whats not to like? Great poem mate.
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Hi Di, I just had this idea
Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2025
Hi Di, I just had this idea that maybe this long last watch was just hanging about somewhere with everyone thinking it was a fake. Its a true story about the watch. It was Buzz Aldrins and it has been missing since 1970!
Read full commentPosted in The Speedy ( Part 3 ) Final
Wow, there's a lot going on
Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2025
Wow, there's a lot going on here. Electric Radiator, Dogs deep bark, and then my favoutite. Mossy tiles and piano keys, what a great description and for me, a visualistion. I have mossy tile on my roof! And when it rains it does seem like a tune...
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