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I have 476 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 709204 times and 357 of my stories have been cherry picked.
81 of my 5,354 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 86 votes

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Jolono

Found the site in November 2011. Love the friendly and easy format. Write stories and the occasional poem. Have two books published, available from Amazon. The East End Butcher Boy and Eastendbutchers Short Story Collection.  Always amazed at the diversity of the site and the quality of the writing. Try to write as much as I can and like to try different styles. Hope you like my stories. 

Find me on www.jolono.wordpress.com

And my first book on Amazon http://www.amazon.co.uk/s/ref=nb_sb_ss_i_0_21?url=search-alias%3Daps&fie...

About me...http://spitalfieldslife.com/2015/03/22/joe-lawrence-traditional-butcher-...

And ...https://authorsinterviews.wordpress.com/2016/08/22/here-is-my-interview-...

 

 

My stories

Cherry

The Sherbet Lemon Conversation.

I’m on a flight from London Gatwick to Faro Portugal. Easyjet. No frills, no time. Just two and a half hours of boredom. I’m sipping a vodka and...
Cherry

That Morning

A re-write of something I did years ago. I got up late that morning, too late. My head was pounding like cannon balls being fired from an old galleon...

Ginny. ( Part 6)

I’m one of three kids. I have two sisters. One older and one younger. Barbara is the eldest and now lives in Australia with her husband Ray. She’d...
Cherry

Ginny. ( Part 5)

It was after seven and the Scotch was still coming fast and furious. I’d been up on stage twice, once for “That’s Life” and once for “Summer Wind”...
Cherry

Ginny. ( Part 4)

It was 2.30pm, and on a Friday I knew exactly where Uncle Ted would be. The Stanley Arms in Bermondsey. It was a tradition. The pub put on food and...

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81 of my comments have received 86 Great Feedback votes

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I like this. Never saw it

Posted on Sat, 15 Mar 2014

I like this. Never saw it coming until he was at the fridge talking to her. I like the paragraph where you describe the sky as being bruised and the sirens yodel off into the distance. Great lines.

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Posted in Kessler's Love

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Like this alphadog. Says so

Posted on Sat, 15 Mar 2014

Like this alphadog. Says so much without being graphic. Nice one.

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Posted in waters of love

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Hi mate, hope you're well.

Posted on Tue, 14 Jan 2014

Hi mate, hope you're well. This was a triumph of poetry madness. Exactly what I want from a Lavadis piece! Witty, intelligent, original, zany yet beautifully wonderful in its extremes.

Loved it.

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Posted in Her 64th boyfriend

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Just thank god you came home

Posted on Tue, 05 Feb 2013

Just thank god you came home safe and sound Siouxie. But what an experience for a teenager to go through. Great memories, well told.Read full comment

Posted in Seventeen - Chapter Three

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Nice tale Frankle. Enjoyed

Posted on Wed, 05 Dec 2012

Nice tale Frankle. Enjoyed this.Read full comment

Posted in Christmas Spudding

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Nice words, very well

Posted on Sun, 29 Jul 2012

Nice words, very well written.Read full comment

Posted in No Moses Child

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I thought this was a great

Posted on Wed, 04 Jul 2012

I thought this was a great story! The introduction was inviting, then the story began with all the confines of her religion and culture, then the ending with the fish swishing its tail and the big brother smiling! I do so love a good story and this...Read full comment

Posted in to swim at any cost

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