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I have 476 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 730425 times and 357 of my stories have been cherry picked.
81 of my 5,353 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 86 votes

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Jolono

Found the site in November 2011. Love the friendly and easy format. Write stories and the occasional poem. Have published three books, all available from Amazon. The East End Butcher Boy, Eastendbutchers Short Story Collection and The Men In The Shadows.  Always amazed at the diversity of the site and the quality of the writing. Try to write as much as I can and like to try different styles. Hope you like my stories. 

Find me on www.jolono.wordpress.com

And my first book on Amazon http://www.amazon.co.uk/s/ref=nb_sb_ss_i_0_21?url=search-alias%3Daps&fie...

About me...http://spitalfieldslife.com/2015/03/22/joe-lawrence-traditional-butcher-...

And ...https://authorsinterviews.wordpress.com/2016/08/22/here-is-my-interview-...

 

 

My stories

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Monroe (8)

After just four hours sleep, Frank was back at his desk in Limehouse by 7 am. One of the guys from the Special Firearms Unit brought him a bacon...
Cherry

Monroe ( 7)

The Traffic Warden was still there when Frank and Mark reappeared from Doctor Jeremiah's luxury house. Frank pressed a five-pound note into his hand...
Cherry

Monroe (6)

After a short break, Monroe is back trying to solve the case of Thomas Sago. Frank was on his way to 62 Claremont Road, Forest Gate, the home address...
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Mr Russ.

I don’t have any War Medals from relatives. Dad did National Service in 1950, but was too young to serve in WW2. My Granddads were too young for WW1...
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Monroe (5)

Both Frank and Terry looked at the photo of Thomas Sago on the whiteboard and then back to the video. Yep, it was him. No doubt about it. Sandra...

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81 of my comments have received 86 Great Feedback votes

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A great vivid chunk of

Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016

A great vivid chunk of everyday rush hour train journeys! Great read.

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Posted in District Line ( London competition)

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I agree with everything that

Posted on Sat, 25 Jun 2016

I agree with everything that's been said before. This would make a great start to something much bigger. You have us all hooked by this, we want more of it. But then we're all very greedy people! Loved it. Great read. Fully deserved Golden...

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Posted in The First Step

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This is our Facebook and

Posted on Mon, 02 May 2016

This is our Facebook and Twitter Pick Of The Day. Get a great read everyday with Abctales....

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Posted in I'll Teach You To Burn (IP)

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Really enjoyed this. The

Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2016

Really enjoyed this. The characterisations were superb. Felt like I was standing beside them listening to every word.!

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Posted in The 100/1 shot

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Good concept with lots of

Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2015

Good concept with lots of possibilities to explore. This chapter does need a lot of tidying up though. Lots of typos to sort out and a lot more punctuation is needed to make it flow. Good start so keep at it.

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Posted in A.E Book I Arc I

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I wrote "Knob" on everything

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015

I wrote "Knob" on everything I could put my hands on at school. I used to pinch other kids books and write "Knob" and draw a cock all over them. Why? No idea. Just thought it was a cool thing to do. We all did. The drawing of a cock and balls on...

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Posted in the anatomically correct penis

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Love the last few lines. Sums

Posted on Mon, 30 Nov 2015

Love the last few lines. Sums it all up.

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Posted in the We of We

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This is so much better than

Posted on Mon, 23 Nov 2015

This is so much better than the first one. You've tightened it up and not used too many words. The first two paragraphs are good. But I'd lose a few of the "inhales, exhales"

Keep writing and keep reading. Try a few different genres as...

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Posted in Ice Heart (part 3)

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Me? I loved it. We say sorry

Posted on Thu, 20 Aug 2015

Me? I loved it. We say sorry for almost everything. Sometimes it's brave to say it just the way it is. "I'm not sorry for telling you you're a complete moron and making you cry." Being just one of them...

But then there's the ending, where...

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Posted in I am not sorry

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Firstly a big warm welcome to

Posted on Fri, 14 Aug 2015

Firstly a big warm welcome to the site. Nice start. Liked the way you used Macbeth lines to break this up, I thought it worked well. Good dialogue. Very current and beleivable. Look forward to reading more.

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Posted in Tis Unnatural: A Tale of a Great Schism

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