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Found the site in November 2011. Love the friendly and easy format. Write stories and the occasional poem. Have two books published, available from Amazon. The East End Butcher Boy and Eastendbutchers Short Story Collection. Always amazed at the diversity of the site and the quality of the writing. Try to write as much as I can and like to try different styles. Hope you like my stories.
Find me on www.jolono.wordpress.com
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82 of my comments have received 88 Great Feedback votes
Good concept with lots of
Posted on Wed, 30 Dec 2015
Good concept with lots of possibilities to explore. This chapter does need a lot of tidying up though. Lots of typos to sort out and a lot more punctuation is needed to make it flow. Good start so keep at it.Read full comment
Posted in A.E Book I Arc I
I wrote "Knob" on everything
Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015
I wrote "Knob" on everything I could put my hands on at school. I used to pinch other kids books and write "Knob" and draw a cock all over them. Why? No idea. Just thought it was a cool thing to do. We all did. The drawing of a cock and balls on...Read full comment
Posted in the anatomically correct penis
This is so much better than
Posted on Mon, 23 Nov 2015
This is so much better than the first one. You've tightened it up and not used too many words. The first two paragraphs are good. But I'd lose a few of the "inhales, exhales"
Keep writing and keep reading. Try a few different genres as...Read full comment
Posted in Ice Heart (part 3)
Me? I loved it. We say sorry
Posted on Thu, 20 Aug 2015
Me? I loved it. We say sorry for almost everything. Sometimes it's brave to say it just the way it is. "I'm not sorry for telling you you're a complete moron and making you cry." Being just one of them...
But then there's the ending, where...Read full comment
Posted in I am not sorry
Firstly a big warm welcome to
Posted on Fri, 14 Aug 2015
Firstly a big warm welcome to the site. Nice start. Liked the way you used Macbeth lines to break this up, I thought it worked well. Good dialogue. Very current and beleivable. Look forward to reading more.Read full comment
Posted in Tis Unnatural: A Tale of a Great Schism
A big warm welcome to the
Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2015
A big warm welcome to the site. Best thing I've read in ages. SOOOOOOOOOOO beleivable. Saw the characters as I read it. And...who the fuck is Alfie! Or should I say, "Whats it all about Alfie".Read full comment