JPH30

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I have 15 stories published in 0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 9406 times and 8 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2 of my 16 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2 votes

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Cherry

Schadenfreude

You are a bad friend. Deal with it. Accept it and move on. Anything you try and do to change this is a waste of time; learn to accept your inner...
Cherry

Everyone Says Hi

Everyone Says Hi I excuse myself from the discussion my uncle’s are having about which way was quickest to get here, because, in the short history of...
Cherry

Another Lonely Boy

Another Lonely Boy Well it was a day where I needed reminding that I was still alive. I’d woken up in my hostel covered in sick. I was alone. The...

Tribal Dating

Tribal Dating Robbie Boy or Man? Boy Age: 20 Height: 5’7 Weight: 65 kg Hair: Blonde Eyes: Grey I’m lying on my bed, my tracksuit bottoms round my...

For the children

October, 2015 Labour won the election, and Ed Miliband is now the PM. Nick Clegg became a Tory peer for ‘personal’ reasons, and David Cameron is...

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2 of my comments have received 2 Great Feedback votes

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Beautiful sentiment. A small

Posted on Sun, 14 Sep 2014

Beautiful sentiment. A small suggestion - the ! steals away the mood. As a reader, I prefer less influence from the author. Beautiful writing though. 

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Posted in Gone

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Very inventive and original.

Posted on Fri, 12 Sep 2014

Very inventive and original. Word spacing could be off-putting? It's akin to a chapter in David Levithan's 'The Realm of Possibility'. 

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Posted in Alice Travels.