monodemo
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I have 445 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 288273 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Enough
As I reclined on the black leather chair, dozing, reading James Patterson’s new novel in the front room, the alien sound of the letter box clunked...
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- 353 reads
The Small Black Velvety Box
I opened my eyes on Christmas morning excited about the fact that I thought I was going to be presented with an engagement ring. I came to that...
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- 556 reads
Extortion
‘Oh shit!’ David uttered as he saw the reflexion of the flash as the neighbours’ kids’ polaroid camera snaped against the shiny metal bin. ‘Caught...
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- 651 reads
Rumination
I lay in bed petrified to sleep, ruminating over the torturous class that will greet me with the sun. Every Sunday night without fail, the same dread...
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- 495 reads
Unheard Gossip
‘Penelope, Penelope are you home?’ I called up the stairs to my daughter. I had just done a massive weekly grocery shop, as we had had nothing in the...
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- 795 reads