monodemo

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I have 445 stories published in 18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 288493 times and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes

Hi I'm monodemo,

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.

Thanks.

My stories

First Kiss

By monodemo on Tue, 15 Jun 2021

Way back when I was twelve years old, everyone was approaching, or had already been introduced to puberty. As per nature, there was a good amount of...

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The Eulogy

By monodemo on Sat, 12 Jun 2021

I cleared my throat as I stepped up to the podium, shaking, crumbling the piece of paper in my right hand from nerves, my left containing a...

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Caged Bird

By monodemo on Wed, 09 Jun 2021

I feel like a caged bird, trapped, looking through bars, wishing to be free. I stand on my perch observing other birds constructing nests, excited...

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Three Strikes

By monodemo on Wed, 09 Jun 2021

Penelope nervously rocked backwards and forwards in her chair as she sat in wait of Dr Megan O’Neill. Penelope was dreading the meeting as she knew...