monodemo
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I have 445 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 287813 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Ever the Optimist
Are you just another person alone Falling into the abyss? Do you believe you can be saved By true loves first kiss? Will one clumsy word or...
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- 414 reads
Heartbeat
In 2007, I was diagnosed with a blood condition called lupus anti-coagulant. It means that my blood clots quicker than normal. I was devastated when...
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- 754 reads
Shame
I had a three o clock appointment with Mr. Hamill, an orthopaedic surgeon. I went into the receptionist at ten to three, ten minutes early. I always...
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Conformity
I was a victim of conformity as I was growing up, but without it I wouldn’t be the person I am now. At fifteen I lost a lot of friends who saw me as...
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The Pocket Watch
I went shopping with my aunt Fiona not really in the market to buy anything, but it was a novelty after covid and lockdown. Both myself and Fiona...
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