monodemo
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I have 445 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 286511 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
sinead
‘Hello!’ Nel bellowed as she went through the front door slamming it behind her. ‘Hello?’ She got no response. She knew someone was in the house...
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The Dice Acquiring Jacqui part 3
She got up and screamed as loud as she could when George turned her around and pushed her, face first, to the ground and put his foot on her back to...
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The Dice Acquiring Jacqui part 2
George once again took out his knife from its ankle holster. The girl recoiled and pulled herself into a ball rocking back and forth, tears reeling...
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Chapter 1 Acquiring Jacqui part 1
Chapter 1 Acquiring Jacqui Lenny smiled his crooked smile and took another bite of his moreish triple decker BLT sandwich. He was looking out the...
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I cry
Every time I shower, I cry, The sobs muffled only by the boom, boom, boom, of the music I play in the background, my tears washed away by the water...
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