monodemo
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I have 450 stories published in
21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 486519 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 358 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
We're not in Kansas anymore!
She sat idly, smelling the freshly mown grass in the air, a well-read book on her knee. She had never been so depressed. She had 1 hour out of her...
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- 1145 reads
Little Suzanne
In a two up two down terraced house, is where her pain began. That small green couch, on that busy rug, is where he touched Suzanne. Suzanne had not...
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- 418 reads
Perpetual emotions
Undulating waves of emotions preside over me, I must learn to say no! Everyone pays, were all diminished To suffering and pain, a life Unfinished...
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- 412 reads
Train on a track
My mind races forward like a train on a track, The seconds tick tock like a drum. Some things you just can’t take back, This being the ultimate one!...
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- 1007 reads
My wonderful nanny
“Where is she?” I asked As her hand firmly clasped The tv remote to her ear. Puzzled she looked For it the phone she mistook My heart skipped a beat...
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- 276 reads