monodemo
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I have 447 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 330233 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Train on a track
My mind races forward like a train on a track, The seconds tick tock like a drum. Some things you just can’t take back, This being the ultimate one!...
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- 792 reads
My wonderful nanny
“Where is she?” I asked As her hand firmly clasped The tv remote to her ear. Puzzled she looked For it the phone she mistook My heart skipped a beat...
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- 199 reads
sinead
‘Hello!’ Nel bellowed as she went through the front door slamming it behind her. ‘Hello?’ She got no response. She knew someone was in the house...
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The Dice Acquiring Jacqui part 3
She got up and screamed as loud as she could when George turned her around and pushed her, face first, to the ground and put his foot on her back to...
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- 357 reads
The Dice Acquiring Jacqui part 2
George once again took out his knife from its ankle holster. The girl recoiled and pulled herself into a ball rocking back and forth, tears reeling...
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- 327 reads