monodemo
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I have 450 stories published in
21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 474013 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 358 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
You'd be scared too!
You’d be scared too, if you were me! A black toothed man is who I see, He carries around a hunting knife, And constantly threatens to end my life...
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- 1288 reads
Pink Mist
I open the door , You force your way in, ‘What did I do?’ Said a voice from within. You point your gun Right in my face, In my mind My steps I...
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- 565 reads
Disassociation
My body numb, My emotions stunted, The mind shut down, ‘Help me’ I grunted. The contributor, stress, When will it end? Are you real? Or are you a...
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forever we shall sleep
A butterfly that lives forever, is not at butterfly at all! That says a great deal about mankind, The eyes the windows to the soul. In blood upon...
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- 726 reads
When it all goes wrong
Today I got dumped, Through a text, I hung my head Totally perplexed. We had talked at two, And then at twenty past, Her whole demeanour Changed, It...
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- 636 reads