monodemo

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I have 424 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 152724 times and 110 of my stories have been cherry picked.
35 of my 356 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 36 votes

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Hi I'm monodemo,

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better. 

Thanks.

My stories

I've forgotten

I’ve forgotten The pain I’d get in my head I’ve forgotten The times I wished myself dead I’ve forgotten My mother Feeding me my dinner I’ve forgotten...

self defence

As Margaret slowly opened her eyes she noticed the black pillowcase her head lay on. She was lying on her stomach which wasn’t unusual for her...

Undercover

Dennis was a cop, a leader, He went undercover as a drug dealer, He worked his way up the ranks, Respect was what he got as thanks, When he was put...

Lipstick

‘Peter, Peter’ Lucy said as she shook her husband to wake him up. ‘mmm, what?’ he mumbled. ‘get up, it’s after eight!’ she said with unease as she...

darkness

My eyes were open but it was so dark I couldn’t see. The only glimmer of light was that which was came from under the thick steel door that kept me...

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