monodemo
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I have 450 stories published in
21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 466153 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 358 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
The Jar
Josh was a tortured young soul. When he was fifteen he was made an orphan. Both of his parents, his brother and two sisters died in a car crash. Josh...
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- 1348 reads
What was stolen?
‘What was stolen?’ The detective said As she put pressure To her head. ‘What was stolen?’ The detective asked, Her mind went straight To her past. ‘...
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- 2070 reads
Nightmares
Violent Nightmares, Every night. Vivid Images, Penetrate. Violence Digressing, Eyes open. Tablets Inviting, Ingestion. Silence, Peace, Success!
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- 1983 reads
Strangers on a Train
We were strangers on a train I fell in love, with your brain The times cross word you always solved Never anyone else involved I talked to you only...
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- 1309 reads
This mosters back in town
‘Did you kill her? I need to ask, Based on conditions From your past. Last night Is a bit hazy, At the party Everyone went crazy! Gone the days Of...
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