monodemo
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I have 445 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 288359 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
heart broken
Even though I try and try Down these rotten tears I cry Will I ever get a break? Or my life do I take? Cigarettes and alcohol Numb the tears as they...
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- 596 reads
tinder nightmare
From the nail bed, fingernails gone Down a well far from her home Thankfully it was nearly dry How many days have gone by? ‘Help!’ she yells to no...
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- 774 reads
The cupboard under the stairs
In the cupboard under the stairs Socks lie in imperfect pairs The cogs in my head start turning It smells like toast burning Should I take on the...
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- 400 reads
this is me
In this magical place I stay, Bullies I leave far away, My only friend, imagination, Free from all indignation Negativity I tend to resent No need in...
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family fued
Feeling your warm embrace Brought tears upon my face I know the past involved a feud And how me you almost sued I admit there was deception Of me you...
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- 412 reads