monodemo
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I have 447 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 325062 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
999 Emergency
‘Hello!’ Pip bellowed as she went through the front door slamming it behind her. ‘Hello?’ she repeated but got no response. She knew someone was in...
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wakadoodle
Cathy, a single mother of three, was cursing and swearing over the fact that her baby, four year old Pip, was about to start school and her bag was...
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- 505 reads
heart broken
Even though I try and try Down these rotten tears I cry Will I ever get a break? Or my life do I take? Cigarettes and alcohol Numb the tears as they...
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tinder nightmare
From the nail bed, fingernails gone Down a well far from her home Thankfully it was nearly dry How many days have gone by? ‘Help!’ she yells to no...
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- 829 reads
The cupboard under the stairs
In the cupboard under the stairs Socks lie in imperfect pairs The cogs in my head start turning It smells like toast burning Should I take on the...
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- 464 reads