monodemo
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I have 447 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 324360 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Undercover
Dennis was a cop, a leader, He went undercover as a drug dealer, He worked his way up the ranks, Respect was what he got as thanks, When he was put...
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- 387 reads
Lipstick
‘Peter, Peter’ Lucy said as she shook her husband to wake him up. ‘mmm, what?’ he mumbled. ‘get up, it’s after eight!’ she said with unease as she...
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- 855 reads
darkness
My eyes were open but it was so dark I couldn’t see. The only glimmer of light was that which was came from under the thick steel door that kept me...
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- 710 reads
bang
At my temple points his gun screams inside me say to run Happen my daughter be a witness Scarred for life my little princess ‘Daddy has to go to...
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- 719 reads
desperation
Though we live miles apart, You have gone and stole my heart, Though my face you cannot see, And I know you don’t love me, You can call and I will go...
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- 548 reads