monodemo
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I have 445 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 288438 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
darkness
My eyes were open but it was so dark I couldn’t see. The only glimmer of light was that which was came from under the thick steel door that kept me...
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- 647 reads
bang
At my temple points his gun screams inside me say to run Happen my daughter be a witness Scarred for life my little princess ‘Daddy has to go to...
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- 683 reads
desperation
Though we live miles apart, You have gone and stole my heart, Though my face you cannot see, And I know you don’t love me, You can call and I will go...
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- 504 reads
999 Emergency
‘Hello!’ Pip bellowed as she went through the front door slamming it behind her. ‘Hello?’ she repeated but got no response. She knew someone was in...
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wakadoodle
Cathy, a single mother of three, was cursing and swearing over the fact that her baby, four year old Pip, was about to start school and her bag was...
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- 476 reads