monodemo
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I have 445 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 288465 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Betrayer
Heart palpitating to the rhythm Of its own beat, Fame, deceit, For you unto her I bequeath? Damage! Lies! Cut from all family ties. They could have...
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- 402 reads
Heartbreak
How my heart was broken Is a story I must tell She ghosted me Then roasted me Upon the fires of hell The first time I saw her My heart did skip a...
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- 460 reads
Are you a good driver?
Are you a good driver? Do you like to speed? Or curse and shout At a roundabout When there is no need? Are you a good driver? Your licence is it...
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- 463 reads
Witness box
First he froze As panic rose Sweat upon his face Splinters flying His pregnant wife crying As officers flooded the place ‘What do you want?’ He...
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- 531 reads
Intelligence
For you my dear, I think and fear Are a real bull-shitter. Your lies are weak, acrid they stink Stammering on the phone. When I called you out, you...
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- 399 reads