monodemo
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I have 450 stories published in
21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 484600 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 358 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Plus Sized
I’m sorry I lied to you And hurt you over the years When I see this I try to Hold back all the tears. You don’t feel comfort Within your own skin You...
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You took my shining star!
You took my shining star! Why? You had all the others in the sky! Try as I may, I cannot understand. Buy it back, nay, You have the upper hand! Let’s...
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I'm proud of you son!
Trusting her got you caught in a snare, Beating to the sound of her drum, Son, whatever the outcome, Know that this girl was a deceiver, Not like a...
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Revenge
Wonder appeared on your young face, Brace, for your husband is about to chase you down towards the town, ‘Help!’ you scream, Yelp it seems, is all...
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- 886 reads
Death sentence
‘Extinction, That’s what are after conviction, Your crime Is miniscule compared to mine!’ Said the lawyer after trial, Just to prevent this vial That...
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