monodemo
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I have 447 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 315652 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Oh Brother
Please baby brother come sit with me, I want to tell you a story of who you could be. If you look into the future, you can’t be harmed, But in some...
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- 881 reads
RIP
I sit at the window and start to cry I watch the crowd below go by On their faces they’re personalities glimmer And my skin begins to shiver I grab a...
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- 497 reads
A Smile
Are you out of your mind? You will never be normal! Progression you have to find And make a smile formal For smiling is a right of life It’s one of...
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- 537 reads
Mirror
I look at myself in the mirror and see A person looking back at me I don’t know how she got so old And vicious, malicious and cold Towards herself I...
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- 481 reads
failure
When you’re at the brink of adulthood You have to take the famous exams that would Project your academic prowess And deliberate your future success...
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- 894 reads