monodemo
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I have 449 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 429493 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
my first love
I have come to see You don’t know me You are just a liar Through the light You aren’t so bright How did that conspire? That person who I reached out...
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Clouds
Look into the clouds What do you see? A squirrel? A pigeon? A cup of tea? Look into the clouds Can you imagine? The surreal expression of someone...
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Oh Brother
Please baby brother come sit with me, I want to tell you a story of who you could be. If you look into the future, you can’t be harmed, But in some...
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RIP
I sit at the window and start to cry I watch the crowd below go by On their faces they’re personalities glimmer And my skin begins to shiver I grab a...
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- 659 reads
A Smile
Are you out of your mind? You will never be normal! Progression you have to find And make a smile formal For smiling is a right of life It’s one of...
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- 680 reads