monodemo
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I have 445 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 288518 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
A Smile
Are you out of your mind? You will never be normal! Progression you have to find And make a smile formal For smiling is a right of life It’s one of...
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- 510 reads
Mirror
I look at myself in the mirror and see A person looking back at me I don’t know how she got so old And vicious, malicious and cold Towards herself I...
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- 430 reads
failure
When you’re at the brink of adulthood You have to take the famous exams that would Project your academic prowess And deliberate your future success...
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- 842 reads
LGBT
For this type of generation There needs to be some liberation To support those who feel they have been Born in the wrong gender and seen Others who...
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- 784 reads
Connemara
On holiday to Connemara we went Me, my dad, and my dog Max spent Ten days in the country so vast Alone we’d never been in the past On the rocks the...
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- 383 reads