monodemo
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I have 447 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 314499 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
the zoo
‘Will you come to the zoo?’ my father suggested. I originally said yes but then I reflected; Why put myself through that, I’m an intellectual, His...
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the thank you note
To Auntie Marge, Thank you for having me last weekend. I got out of the hospital yesterday. It’s nice to be home in my own bed. I’m sorry for...
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- 424 reads
Chaos in Disney
Cathy, Sinead and Pip, Michaels sisters had been over to Disney to visit him in October for Halloween. Michael worked in Disney land Paris as a few...
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- 619 reads
One of Seven
Tommy was a five year old boy. It was a magical age; it’s the age where cars picked up tigers from the zoo and brought them all to a tea party in New...
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- 502 reads
the dice
Ne l was a good girl. She enjoyed the simple things like a good book or movie. She liked school. She was smart, funny and popular. She enjoyed every...
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- 777 reads