monodemo
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I have 445 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 288495 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Sorry
I’m sorry I lied to you And hurt you over the years When I see this I try to Hold back all the tears You don’t feel comfort Within your own skin You...
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- 395 reads
Love Triangle
I think a love triangle I’ve gotten myself into These two individuals with to the moon I’ve been to To tears they both have brought me on separate...
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- 424 reads
Contradiction
I love planes But am afraid of flying I love swimming But am afraid of drowning I love sleep But am afraid to go to bed I love love But am afraid of...
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- 375 reads
Blow
Louise if you go out tonight With cocaine in your pocket It’s going to be fight or flight Like a finger in a socket The Gardai are going to come to...
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- 676 reads
Death
When you’re desperate and you Cut yourself to feel That feeling is it true? At least the blood is real Into the bath tub you get And take some potion...
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- 639 reads