monodemo
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I have 450 stories published in
21 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 465259 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 358 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
Young at heart
I look in the mirror and all I can see Is a frail old woman staring back at me ‘Mom, is that you?’ I ask her bemused But then I realize I was...
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sausage nation
I live in a sausage nation, A creation, Where all you can eat is good food, No feud, For the amount of sausage is endless. My human bends down and...
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- 1417 reads
Grandfather
You sired 12 children who loved you dearly, 25 grandchildren you met all so nearly, You have 21 great grand children so far and counting, Each year...
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Green Eyed Monster
They say everything is temporary, But with money families should be wary! He’s having money troubles, but aren’t we all? When she gives him money, I...
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Autumn Years
She once was a vibrant green leaf on a great big oak, Swaying nonchalantly with her friends, laughing at a joke, Now yellow and starting to turn...
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- 1114 reads