monodemo
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I have 445 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 288438 times
and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
The Wedding Nightmare
The air was sombre and dark The atmosphere was thin He was about to embark On a mystery from within For whom could it be? He thought As he looked...
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- 434 reads
Gambling
He was very factitious I thought he would explode His visions of work fictitious His secret about to implode His demeanour was nonchalant His bank...
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- 400 reads
Mental Health
Why does mental health hold such a stigma? That to me is such an enigma Because when people do speak out Depression and anxiety it is all about What...
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- 810 reads
My Daughter
Hi there little lady Finally you are here I thought that maybe You would never be near You just put your mom through A 26 hour labour Now you are...
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Broken Home
Dave got up on Christmas day And then he just left His kids they were unable to play They were so bereft Anger rose inside Dave's wife She had other...
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- 829 reads