monodemo

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I have 449 stories published in 18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 429849 times and 117 of my stories have been cherry picked.
36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes

Hi I'm monodemo,

I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.

Thanks.

My stories

Heartbreak

By monodemo on Mon, 09 Sep 2019

How my heart was broken Is a story I must tell She ghosted me Then roasted me Upon the fires of hell The first time I saw her My heart did skip a...

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Are you a good driver?

By monodemo on Sun, 08 Sep 2019

Are you a good driver? Do you like to speed? Or curse and shout At a roundabout When there is no need? Are you a good driver? Your licence is it...

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Witness box

By monodemo on Sun, 08 Sep 2019

First he froze As panic rose Sweat upon his face Splinters flying His pregnant wife crying As officers flooded the place ‘What do you want?’ He...

Drama

Crime

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Intelligence

By monodemo on Sat, 07 Sep 2019

For you my dear, I think and fear Are a real bull-shitter. Your lies are weak, acrid they stink Stammering on the phone. When I called you out, you...

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