monodemo
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I have 447 stories published in
18 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 326050 times
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36 of my 359 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 37 votes
Hi I'm monodemo,
I'm not long into the serious business of writing. I've dabbled for years but now I'm serious about it. I would appreciate any and all feedback because I want to get better.
Thanks.
My stories
The queen is dead
I was in England for my wife's birthday, Down the West End. We brought our lovely daughter, And her best friend. We wandered into a busy pub, Just...
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The cell
A long narrow room, With bars on the door, It smells like damp, Water on the floor. The exposed brick, The darkened light, I look around, And see in...
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- 660 reads
When will this all end?
I regret the advice the government gave Not to stock up on food and loo roll, All of this hassle I would have saved, When covid 19 came to call. The...
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- 509 reads
Oh how the mighty have fallen
Your crown built upon deceit, You emotionally defeat those around you Without thought nor consequence With your serpent tongue. Like a queen upon...
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- 534 reads
You're not alone!
I remember it like It was yesterday, When cold steal Washed my troubles away, I felt them flow Like a waterfall, Out of my body And onto a shawl, It...
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